 XTimeGirlX 2009-11-20 . chapter 1Beautiful, lovely story and very, very true of The Doctor. I loved it, you write so sensitively and beautifully, it's really good. X =D |
 Clouded Horizon 2009-07-18 . chapter 1Sad. :(
This line was great:
'She leaps at the him that’s meant for her, and he turns his back as their lips meet.'
You really feel for him, and the quote matches exactly. I also liked the idea of him wanting her to move on, so not saying what he wanted to say.
Lovely, and very sad and sweet.
~clouded horizon~ |