ha! I loved the ending of chapter 5!
awesome story!
:D

Sorry, I really have nothing useful to say. I think it's really cute, though.

What I wanted to say was: you know the TV show Jeopardy where they ask trivia questions and stuff? There was a question about the different names of Cupid and the answer was Amor. I wouldn't have known it if I hadn't read this earlier today. The synchronicity continues...

Remember fairies live for hundreds of years. Also, Cupid could have been more than three generations away, but he decided not to put several great's there.

sorry if you have been told this before but Holly had actually seen Artemis asleep in the TTP when they were flying back to Fowl manor after the 7th kraken incident. besides that i absolutely loved your story and will probably reread it to cheer me up just like i do with page 138 of the TTP. Write more stories please!
-Captain Short

yay :D

Aw, it's finished? No! But, as they say, good things have to come to a end eventully. But besides that, this was a really good story! I like it!
Thanx for updating!

i like the plot and the idea, though, i can say nothing more. execpt for don't change your summary. that thing REALLY caught my interest. i just hope you like MY interest.

it being over has made me sad. but i loved the story :)

Very good, love the way you've managed to keep this in character. nice one.
Liris
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COMPLETE?!! D: no!

Haha. I've been loving this story so much, it never occurred to me that it would end so soon :( but no matter. It was a beautiful ending, albeit a bit abrupt :P

A tiny bit smutty, but since you said you were aiming for 100% romance, you've completely succeeded :) The dialogue between the characters is brilliant as ever, and as for Cupid being Holly's great-grandfather, well, why couldn't it be true? ;D But I don't think Eoin Colfer really meant for it to be a significant detail...then again, we may find out when he finishes the seventh (and last, I was devastated to hear) AF book; I read somewhere that it would explain the link between Holly and Artemis's births, or something like that.

It's been such a pleasure reading your work :) Thank you once again for sharing it with us! And I sincerely hope there will be more Arty-Holly romance from you soon :D

Thank you - this story has been such a pleasure, both for its subject and for the style and craft of your writing.

I maintain that the Cupid detail is seriously fun to play with. I've introduced him before, and have plans to do so again. I get the feeling Colfer didn't realize he'd be writing sequels, and just thought it would be an easy way to describe her. I doubt he'll ever go into it.

A very good ending. Romantic, without too much sap. You acknowledge their possible difficulties, without making them seem to insurmountable.

Aww, that chapter was so adorable. It made me all fuzzy inside. xD

Haha, Butler is quite smart. Though, it WAS kinda obvious since they spent the night together. I can't wait to see Foaly's reaction!

Update soon :)

Well, the only problem with this chapter as far as I can see is now the story's over!!
This is a gem, thank you:)

So, what really happened?