Burst-ed isn't a word, yo.

It's 'she burst into tears.'

Who in hell gave you the word 'burst-ed'?

keep going please!
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A very adorable chapter; rather similar to that scene in Ever After, where Ella chucks apples at the prince when he steals a horse... :) but I can't help thinking that flower-stealing... well, it's a strange idea for the scene. not bad, though. again, I really liked it.

~Pepper

this is cool so far
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A good start and I cant wait to see where you take this story. Although I don't think 'burst-ed' is a word - it sounds like something a five year old says, the correct work is burst. :) Other than that, well done.

hmm, i think i really like this story. I'll keep reading as long as there's no smut or slash... C.S. Lewis would never have written such, and I like the original books.