so so cute! and so descriptive from max's view. very good. i thought for the longest time that you had just dropped this storyline b/c the first story "fairy tale" stopped after their joining ceremony and was never listed as complete. i'm so glad i stumbled upon the 2 sequels when i went to your ff page. please continue with this and show max getting older. great story. thanks!!

Aw, that was adorable! I love little Max, he's so adorable. The whole scene with Max and the Thing was so cute, Max is already a ladies man! xD

Please update soon, I need to find out what happens! :D

XD Nice. I wonder what the odds are of Max seeing Thing agian. XP Perhaps a different Thing? ^.^ So cute.

Wow,my teeth are decaying,too much sweets or just because of your fluffy fic?

This is adorable. But of course you have to know that. I just love, love, love Max. The thing was adorable too. Glad Max didn't want a bow.

Loved this:

"Hydrated sounded scary. Max hugged Mama tight and was glad when she gave him some juice instead."

Wonderful work. I love this story.

Aww...it was so sweet and The Thing,lol :))

This was so cute! He's already discovered girls! Thanks for the update.

it was a good one thank you cant want to read the next chapter thanks

Sweet! Poor Max got sick from his shot-but got to meet a girl?Very funny-thanks for the cute way Tony teased Pepper. And Max's reaction...just right! More please?:)

Have I mentioned how much I love the name 'Pengraff' for Augie and Clairol's babies? Also, tator tot/chocolate cookies...hm...

Baby Cupid! Or Cupid Junior! So cute!

Is Mab okay with Cupid recruting her godson as his apprentice? How will Tony and Pepper react? I wonder if Max could enter Jarvis' dreams.

Yay, thanks for updating! I love reading this story from Max's point of view.

Aw, little Max has wings! So cute. It's going to be really interesting to see Max flying around the house.

Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Aw! Go Max! You're doing a great job at eloquently telling a story from a baby's point of view.

thank you it was a good one thanks

Oh...this is not good-Cupid is trying to control Max in his dreams? Can Tony and Pepper stop this...and is Mab involved? Or is this just a warning and Mab will help keep him safe from Cupid's "Big Man"? Great imagery-the mental pic of poor Tony's reaction to Max's wings was great! Thanks for the holiday treat-what next?:)