oh yeah! I have to agree--> Akane never gets angry at Ryoga. ^_^ hihihi

Actually, I can easily imagine Rumiko Takahashi ending it just like this, lol. I loved all the foreshadowing, and how it was the little old lady who did him in in the end. Very funny!!

I liked it very much, maybe 'cause I was also exploring some other possibilities... personally, I just think the "Akane beating Ranma and Ryouga to death for being such a pair of perverted liars" is turning into a cheap cliché.

Your story is exactly the kind of thing that I think Rumiko Takahashi would go for. And is also soo cute XD

*sweatdrop*
*does a face-fault too*
I must admit that this was very enjoyable. And the end scene was simply the best thing I read in ages.
Great work.

Oh my...I nearly fell out of my box laughing. I love this!

Akane would be THAT thick, wouldn't she?

Not a bad little parody, but I'd like to point out that the reason why Akane has never gotten upset with Ryoga in canon is because he's never done anything that she considers offensive. For whatever reason, she doesn't care about his vendetta with Ranma, and the fact he always leaps to her defense verbally and physically, not to mention being willing to soothe her ego by such actions as forcing down her vile concoctions and claiming they're delicious, just makes him look better in her eyes.

If anything, this would only make her react WORSE if she did find out about the curse. Even if Ryoga doesn't actually look at her when she's naked/changing, he's still abusing her trust and taking advantage of her. Akane does things around P-chan and says things to P-chan that she would never do if she knew the truth. She finds out, she's going to feel betrayed, end of story.

Tanabe School of Water Balloon Martial Arts? Sadly that's not a parody of the Ranma universe.