 JellybeanChiChi 2009-12-10 . chapter 6A monkey from New Jersey? Is he a senator or a governor?
HA HA HA HA HA.
Sorry.
Loved it. I was just thinking about this fic the other day. I keep thinking about the line of how Brass learned about Grissom leaving through the grapevine. I thought that was especially fitting.
Glad you finished the tale. The world needs stories with friendly monkeys (although I still don't trust them. But I trust them more than Bobby Flay. Perhaps if monkeys got a show on the Food Network...)
Sorry. I became unfocused. Love the story. Well done.
- Jean |
 was spratlurid quimby 2009-12-09 . chapter 6That was great |
 SylvieT 2009-12-09 . chapter 6The monkey featured in TPTB's plans for their grand reunion so it's only fitting he takes centre stage here too. A different ending, which you'd warned me about but I enjoyed it very much.
Now I'm going to go and watch that 30 second magnificent clip for the millionth time and sigh a long wistful sigh. Looking forward to more from you. Sylvie. |
 toothchick 2009-11-29 . chapter 5I especially loved the monkey's POV! |
 SylvieT 2009-11-29 . chapter 5You came out with a bang! This was a great update. I loved Jim's bit at the beginning. Looking forward to his arrival in Costa Rica. |
 was spratlurid quimby 2009-11-29 . chapter 5That was good |
 JellybeanChiChi 2009-11-29 . chapter 5Very cute. I liked the monkey at the end. And that's saying a lot; I hate monkeys.
Keep going!
- Jean :-) |
 caro-gsr 2009-09-20 . chapter 4Nice chapter :) If I didn't know better I would say Jim is a bit jelouse of Grissom and Heather's relationship xD
plz ud son |
 feakinlove 2009-09-19 . chapter 4Good decision Grissom! Brass is too cute!
Thanks for the update! |
 was spratlurid quimby 2009-09-19 . chapter 4That was good |
 toothchick 2009-08-31 . chapter 3I love the familiarity between Heather & Brass!! |
 SylvieT 2009-08-31 . chapter 3Congratulation on your nomination for this story! and good luck too! |
 bordercollie 2009-08-31 . chapter 3great start :-) |
 hannaberry 2009-08-31 . chapter 3I try to avoid WIPs, but I accidentally read few lines and got hooked! Now I must put alert on this and wait for updates.
Hope to get an alert soon :)
I enjoy your writing, thanks for sharing. |
 SylvieT 2009-08-18 . chapter 2I'm glad i found this update in my in-box on my return from holidays and I Know I'm going to like the rest of the story for two reasons. I like your style of writing, you're very good at this first person narrative and I like the way you hooked up Brass and Heather. Under different circumstances, I'm sure they'd get on/ get it on. I look forward to the next installment! Oh and also, very clever the way you interpreted the 'would you stay?' line. |