That was am awesome read shame you don't add more chapters anyway I loved it!

Love it! She finally lost it and then talked back to both of them. Great! And Charlie, took him long enough.

"Boys are idiots, Dad. All of them!" LMAO! :-D

Loved this one... Great when Bella stands her ground!

I must say that's a much better way for Edward to reunite with Bella and with the added fun of Jake and some of his pack brothers. It really is more sensible than running off to Italy and saving Edward's life. Not more romantic, just sensible! Also, good for Charlie!

Such a cute story!

That was really, really good. Totally loved it. Bella starts realizing she has to get herself out of her funk after Edward leaving and Jake deserting her. Hears what she believes is one of the bad vampires on her roof after her. Jumps to keep Charlie safe and lands in the middle of what she thinks is another nightmare. Edward's back and telling her he loves her, and Jake is a wolf and trying to protect her from Edward. And what is she thinking? How the hell did I end up in the middle of a mythical world? Laughed a lot. Would loved to have seen that happen in the book. Would have been a lot more fun.

Delightful! bad ass bella! I always wanted her to go off on the guys. thank you!

I loved this one shot. It would make a great chapter-story! I hope you continue it :)

Best Bella ever. She finds her strength without diminishing the feelings that she has for Edward or even Jake.

I really like the way you write Bella, I can honestly say I prefer your Bella to La Meyer's.

I really want to know what happens next in this story, so I hope you find the inspiration to continue it. I would love to see where this Bella goes.

um...that was HILARIOUS. fantastically funny! thank you! also, i'd like to note...i've rarely read a fanfic that does bella's POV so perfectly. i truly felt like i was reading meyer's work. i mean, i know it was just a funny one-shot, but you're REALLY good at being bella. you should try doing for a longer piece. again, thanks...that was great. i'll be giggling for hours in remembrance...

With how Edward and Jake acted I would call them idiots as well...at least they aren't ripping the other to shreds yet..lol...

thanks for sharing

HT

How is this the first time I've read this delightful little one-shot? It is so awesome! I love it! If only SM had though of it! Ha!

Of course I'm glad to see Edward back and to see him beg. I'm glad to see Bella pissed and Jake just makes me laugh and want to hit him at the same time. Gotta love him.

The part where Bella burst into laughter was so perfect. I can see that being my reaction to such a situation.

Thank goodness for Tosha's new blog profiles for each of us! Lol, because apparently I've been blind. :)

I would really, really LOVE to see more of this if you decide to extend into a full story!

And yes, you get HUGS for this one! Just think of me as Jake or perhaps Edward squeezing you against your will ;)

Love your writting. It makes me laught and get worried all in the right places. Thank you for writing.

I love this story. I loved how Edward couldn't stay away and that is what caused the commotion. I loved how BElla took everything that she found out so very calmly. I also loved that she seemed to be the one in control of the two supernatural powers in her yard.