I love it. It is perfection, no suggestions needed!

good parts -

My body is finally drenched

In colorful inventions

Plaguing my flesh and digging

Into my bones like a new

Brand of poison drifting

hiding

Melodies from this

Untalented musician

although this poem didn't rhyme, it triggers thoughts as to why she would do this to herself

goodjob capturing these emotions...

- Lux

this is my favorite book ever and this poem is just wonderful

I really liked this piece, it was well written and nicely done! Good job!

i really like this peace it was a beautiful and artistic at yet at the same time slightly deppressing truly making the thoughts and emotions seem genuine grate job!

(i know i spell everything wrong really sorry)