Very interesting way to express this. A choppy narrative to express a choppy mind. Obviously though, you need help with the naming department, but I won't fault you too much for that.

That was sad.

Is that true with schizophrenia? Are both twins likely to have it? It's been while since I took Psych 101.

Interseting story. I don't really follow the show - just catch an occational episode, so I'm gonna ask a question that's probably stupid. Did you make up the thing about his needing medication or is that actually in the show? Either way, great story.

This was so sad, but really amazing at the same time, I really wanna learn more about Becky and Jack but I really love what you wrote.
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