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Blue-Eyed-Lily
2009-10-17 . chapter 1
KATARA THE NINJA!! *karate chops door* Ow.

*grumbles* Stupid awesome fic got me in ninja mode.
ZukoConfused
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
I liked this story, but the ending was a little hard to believe. You are a good writer. I can't wait to see what else you've written.
Storm Warning
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
The last comment was epic. Really sweet <3
LadyBaSingSe
2009-07-26 . chapter 1
Haha... Sorry I didn't review earlier...

This is an adorable story as well, I love how you two flow so easily when you talk. Even though you can be brutal sometimes, Sokka just takes it, since he knows you so well. It's awesome and really the markings of true love.

And no, you don't need to mention their ages earlier. It's a good clinger while the reader is sorting everthing out to make them more focused on catching the details.

Yes. I am a ninja. No. SUKI [You know who I'm talking about] is NOT ZUKO.

~Katara
Clair-Rae
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
Lol, sneaky Katara...
I loved this, it was so cute! Great work
Miss Hal Gibson
2009-07-20 . chapter 1
That was cute. :)
my3deadlysins
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
It was wonderful! Another amazing job, Tophie. One thing though, you might want to mention their ages sooner, just to clarify things.

Lufflez,
Zuzu
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