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Reviews for: Reflections in a Broken Mirror
Ryan
2009-08-09 . chapter 1
Interesting. I don't think I'd like high heels, however, I may have tried them when I was younger because they were weird. I also don't like make-up. At all.

Sort of an interesting perspective, captures the confusion, and the transient nature of that foster home also has an interesting structure outlining the story. Not a sequence, but rather a snippet of history filled with information, so a lot was conveyed in a narrative format without becoming a laundry list of various things.
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