I really like the dialog, it displays a good level of depth in it, such as with the information on what the characters were thinking and how they said things, and so yeah, I like it.

I am not going to reach the 10 character limit though, and this makes me slightly sad.

I loved this episode what with the parallels between Toby and Daniel, i thought you wrote the scene beautifully.

sorry i can't write a long review with one hand but let me say i really liked this fic