Would I be less of a man if I didn't cry for something like this. Answer: Real men cry. T_T This song used to make me cry. Still does sometimes. Way to turn it into a happy ending. Nicely done.
This is really good! Just one thing though...Hinata's father's name is Hiashi not Hirashi. It's minor, but I thought I would clear it up for you.Again, really good job!