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Commander
2009-12-14 . chapter 9
Oh my God, so are Blossom and Buttercup...? I'm anxious to see how this all plays out. I hope you update soon. :)
Kinda-freak
2009-12-13 . chapter 9
Once again, great. Incredible writing: even in awkward situations, all the characters remained credible and even the little bits of humor weren't out-of-place in the otherwise creepydrama of the whole thing.
The only problem is the fact that the chapters sometimes need to be read a few times in order to actually grasp what is going on, but perhaps the abstractness in your intention, I have no right to judge on your style. :D
So, other then a few very minor spelling errors, everything was incredible as usual. I look forward to the next one.

P.S. Please Update "Marshmallow Crucifixes", I'm looking forward to reading the rest of that one. ^^
Commander
2009-12-11 . chapter 8
Wish I knew what to say here! All I can say again is that this is confusing and intriguing and I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter to see if I can make some sense out of it.

I loved the whole chapter, but (big surprise) the Mojo/Blossom scene was my favorite. I love your take on their relationship. :D
Deus Ex Procella
2009-11-09 . chapter 7
This chapter was just jam-packed with plot. I really don't know what to say Alicorn, it just...so much happens.

The symbology surrounding Him's speech and the corresponding actions. Not to mention what he's implying...the other two dying for the sake of stopping his child? I'm wondering how that will work.

Buttercup and Blossom's fight was so intense...but the biggest point of interest was the revelation of Bubbles. Seeing that the gift of Bob the horse coming back with meaning is...just amazing.

Keep going Alicorn, this is great.
Frosted-Feathers
2009-10-29 . chapter 7
Good gosh. I just took the time to go and read through both your Hibbles stories, and...wow. They are, to put it simply, fantastic. I'll be on the edge of my chair 'till the next update!
Commander
2009-10-25 . chapter 7
I have no idea how you were able to make this chapter be both hilarious and yet chilling and terrifying at the same time, but you did.

And the Mojo/Blossom-ness is, of course, total win. XD

I feel compelled to add this story to my favorites, even though it isn't finished yet... didn't I favorite Legwarmers before it was finished, too? Your writing's just too awesome for me to resist, I guess. XD
mizgardenia21
2009-10-24 . chapter 7
Things are getting more interesting :) Pods, death, and doomed romance oh my! As for an actual critique -I supposed the only things I spotted were some slight spelling errors. But other than that it was a lovely chapter. I look forward to reading more.
Herr Angel D
2009-10-24 . chapter 7
...Izzis one of those Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse things? 'Cause I'm ancy for more and CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE! *has a seizure from sheer joy*
Commander
2009-10-05 . chapter 6
I loved Blossom's reaction to the library. That would have been my reaction too.

Looking forward to the next chapter! I know I'm always late in reviewing them, but that's just becase of lack of time, not because I'm not interested... because each chapter makes me more and more interested. I'm definitely hooked and can't wait to find out what happens next. :)
mizgardenia21
2009-09-29 . chapter 6
A delectable chapter as always dear authoress. How just like Him to leave the other two powerpuffs behind :) I can't wait for the next chapter.
Herr Angel D
2009-09-29 . chapter 6
Oh, SO dramatic! I simply cannot wait until the next chapter to see what will happen! *holds my breath to wait*
mizgardenia21
2009-09-21 . chapter 1
It's even better the second time around :)
mizgardenia21
2009-09-18 . chapter 5
I should have reviewed the first one well...first. I actually didn't think anything could top it. But this is ...I have no words to tell you how good of a writer I think you are. I can't wait for more.
Commander
2009-09-17 . chapter 5
Ah, so that's how the marriage happened! I've got to get the complete set of PPG DVDs and watch the Him/Bubbles chalk episode again (I can't even remember the name of the episode). ^^;

And I think I know what Blossom's secret is, hee hee. XD

Can't wait for more! Him's last sentence really leaves us on a cliffhanger. ;)
Deus Ex Procella
2009-09-15 . chapter 5
The ending is just chilling. Which is a startling change of pace for this AUniverse. I'm curious about Blossom's reaction; granted I have a mild hingling of an idea.

Him's dialogue with Buttercup was just great, and I think "sisterhood of the traveling grumble" might be one of my favorite lines so far.

This certainly took a turn for the more intense. Keep on keeping on :D
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