This is very nice. :O)

that's a sad story...a little calm of a break-up, but it's a good story _

Good story, I loved it!'Course, if it was ME I wouldn't break up with a cutie like Vaughn...oh well. Her loss. *wink*)

Good story. Man, Alice sure was taking the news well. See, if someone as fine as Vaughn were to break up with me, i'd be a hella grumpy lady, but that's just me :0)

Aww! That was very nicely done. I loved how you made Vaughn realistic and you portrayed Alice nicely *claps*

Love it, Nichole! It's an interesting take, seeing it from Alice's point of view.

Good stuff. It's nice to be able to read a story and not be confused by too much background. Hope to see MORE submissions!)