Vey interseting story. I like the concept and your description of the races. I hope you continue to write I'd like to see where you take the story

Yay for inspiring new chapters! ^_^

Seriously though, I'm happy to see new stuff coming from you and I am very curious as to where you want to take all of this. So far, top notch work, as usual.

Hey another good chapter, I really like this keep up the good work, just remember to check the spelling and tense on some stuff, because you talked about a Skyline having headers, it would only have one because its an inline six, but other than that, a fantastic bit of writing.

As I told you before, smooth, and a notable maturity in the writing. You can sense the characters' depth and you haven't lost the edge of excitement that can be so hard to express in these kinds of stories. I like subtle imagery that helps paint a picture of characters beyond descriptions and conversation. Congratulations on a first chapter well done.

and. Akima is well pleased with her intro. ^_^

Hey man, nice to see you writting again. I really liked this first chapter, can't wait to see where you go with this. I liked your characters, well done.