fantastico! i love it. are you planning to add more?

Great job on this really was good. The whole bit in the copy room was genius. I loved it.

umm i was wondering is it over because it doesn't seem like it its like it cut off in the middle of the story. it's like there's more to come

that was SO good-totslly lusty but the undercurrent of desire, buildup, sexual tension, craving...stories like this make me wonder why you don't write professionally but thankful that nyou share your talent with this little fan fic sight...thanks SO much!

Very very hot & so sweet ! A very nice OS ! Thanks for sharing ;-)

This story had such a cute ending! And I love Edward in this story-very hot! Are you planning on writing more of this story?

Obviously a clever cautionary tale against the dangers of cramped copy rooms. At least there was no paper cut.

great story... too bad its only a one shot... has lots of potential if you decide to take it further.

:o)

thanks

amazing job!

OME yes that was incredibly fuckhot!

um, wow! That was hot! You never cease to amaze me with your talent! Please excuse me... lol.

That was very hot.

Hot damn.

Write more!

I'm just checking out the competetion for the LtL contest. This was a great story. I especially liked the banter between E & B in the copy room. And a very hot lemon as well. (of course, I was hoping for sex against the door, but oh well) ;)

Nice work!

IrishGirlTaken

Holy SHIT you can write some major HOTNESS Woman. I just kinda FORGET sometimes and don't close the office door when reading. Haha. xoxo