This was all so sad >.< Poor Kyoya. I felt so bad for him. But the descriptions on your part were great I really felt his pain and the insanity he felt running through my own mind. If that makes sense haha. But it was a really interesting idea and it was really sad but, it turned out well. I really liked it. Good job :)

Reading this made me smile the whole way through, it was so sweet! :D The images and emotions are so well written and I really like your style. It flows well and it's sophisticated without being over the top. The characterization for both were spot on but what got me is how you showed this side of Hibari that would seem out of character, you showed that he has emotion too, while keeping him 100% true to his nature. I loved this chapter and couldn't wait till the last one to review!

Great job, I'm going to go read the rest now

what a wonderful continuatioon xDD i've been waiting <3 and i'm so very satisfied with the ending xD so sweet, but poor kyouya though... it's so sad halfway the fic, but i love it when dino comes back XD thank you for another wonderful fic :D

yay happy ending! ^^ i nearly died... lol there's a lot of smex that made my nose bleed... XD "Dr.Grayorder" - hm... DGM enters my mind XD

LOVE IT HOLY DOOLY JUST ABOUT DIED~! They got a happy ending yay :D Love this so much! I shall keep fangirling over this for way to long :D i picked up about 2 errors, but they weren't too major :D Lovelovelovelove

This was SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER!

I LOVE YOU!

Awesome chapter once again! This one turned out perfect too! I loved the way it ended^^ the next chapter should be about them living happily together! I can't wait to see what you do next!^^

"Grayorder" is quite an unusual german name xD
"Dino gave him a smile, his fingers wiping the flow of tears from Hibari's cheeks." so cute, Hibari-san is the cutest, when he's crying >.<

absolutely nice idea with the doctors and all, even though I think they were a little bit too much xD
but omg I love it :3

what was the thing that Hibari did to Dino that made him have blood on his inner thighs? pls send to

;)

HOOLY DOOLY YOUR D18 IS THE BEST I HAVE EVER READ. NO JOKE. It's really hard to get this pairing really well, because Hibari's such a difficult character to capture and it's hard to imagine what he could be like underneath all that cold indifference and bloodlust. Love it to pieces :D (please can hibari and dino have a happy ending... i cried at the end of this...)

sequel please? *puppy eyes*

Is it relly finished...? :(:(:(:(

;_;;_;_;_;_;;_;;_; Bah, this is just so sweet. ;_;

This story is so sweet~ The angsty moments also could make my heart clench in pain. Really awesome work!

Just one little nitpick. Isn't it supposed to be 'Romario'? Every time I read the word 'Rosario', I just want to laugh XD

this was.. Can't explain, still too much in the fic-mood.
But yeah, first M-rated I read of D18 and must say,
I'll be sure to read this again :D
The way you kept their characters even in the middle of action,
Good!:D