That was fun to read:)

Awesome fic. I love it!

Very sweet! I love the contentment that seems to waft off this piece. We don't often get a glimpse of Lily and the Marauders just having a nice time together at this stage in thier lives. I did feel though that the ending was a little false, a little bit too cheesy after that self-pitying note. Other than that though, beautiful characterisation, and very well written.

Oh, this was so SWEET. No other word for it. And I'm glad that, to offset the note (because it seemed a little too nice for Sirius Black), he left Lily a huge mess in the kitchen. This was great, and it's so nice to see something by you again. :)

-Vee

Very nice. I love how pleased Lily and James were when Sirius told her to call him Padfoot.

I really like this! Lily's friendship with Sirius was very sweet, and the ending was funny and appropriate to the Marauders' characterizations. Lovely job!

Poor Lily, having to clean up his mess! Great job!

Haha! That was pretty good. There is no such thing as a kind Sirius Black. Though I wouldn't be too happy about 'some other things I'll never mention if you (all) were too drunk to remember'. What if James/Remus found that first? Hm...

Aw! What an adorable one-shot. Your Lily wass fabulous, as were all the little details you included along the way, like her envy of Sirius' nice handwriting. Very cute, well-written piece.

This was really cute! I loved it. I am personally a BIG fan of relationships between Lily and Sirius. I think there is a lot more to them then what we were able to see through Rowling's world. I'm very excited to read more from you!

Fnatastic! I LOVE SIRIUS!

I really like your take on the Sirius-Lily dynamic! This is such an aw-worthy story =).

This was really sweet- I like how you characterized everyone, and just the general interaction between the friends felt right. I'm a bit disappointed Peter wasn't included, though.

Keep up the good work!

This was a cute and well written other side to Sirius!
Great job :D

Wow... at least he tried? By the way... such an adorable oneshot!! I loved the characterisation, and you even got Lily's voice right! Yay! Great job!