Yay Vincey!

Lmao. I loved this chapter, the humour in it. Especially "it was stupids idea". Even if i did have to be told it was Vince she was referring to, not Dom as I'd assumed. and Leon taking his turn at being Mr Stupid. But i think my favourite moment has to "would be when he came and made me, or when I came down to kill him because he didn’t come make me" although "mental abilities of a small child" comes a close second.
Loving it hun, can't wait for the next chapter. Stupid not being able to crack your laptops password to sneak a peek...

Great stuff!

wow awsome cant wait for the rest of this faboulous story and i cant spell for **, LOVE vince :) congras great writing :) peace out

aweome chapter! loved that Bryce showed up gain as i loved that character...Lea

Firstly, thanks for the plug :-)

Don't think Jesse's really thought this plan out, and despite her initial objection to it, Temp seems to be going along with it. There's no way this is going to go well for anybody. Didn't see the "Bryce is my brother" plotline coming. It was somewhat surprising to find out, way to build the tension :)

Good chapter, looking forward to the next part!

I lOve it!

When I got to the part where Jesse says, "You have to save him." For some reason AC/DC's 'Jailbreak' went thru my mind.

Great chapter!

loved it as always! can't wait till the next ch.!

awesome chapter! can't wait for the next one

Yay! Escape to Canada! bahahah! Save Vince! Give them anothers chance!...Okay I am hyper!

Awesome! Even if it didnt take temp long to panic over being close to vince! I hope she comes around. I love the way the story is going! Love the suspense and cant wait til u update again so we can find out what happens! Dont want vince to go to prison but if he does i want temp to stay by his side! Love them together!

Dun Dun Duh!
Yeah. Cheers Jesse. **.

Good chapter, brought a smile to my face. Injured, drugged up Vince telling the nurses he'll kill them, and to ** off.

Great stuff, looking forward to the enxt chapter. And I could correct the typo, but honestly, im so tired im lucky not to be asleep on the keyboard.

Aw! O What tomorrow brings! They could never be too sweet/Nice to each other!

So Vince is awake. And crackin jokes. love the "toolbox patrol" comment lol. And 'Shut it Mia' lol.
Great chapter, loving it, and it always leaves me wanting more!!

This is a very good story you've got going on! Can't wait to see what'll happen next!