ME: THAT IS SOO MESSED UP IF I EVER SEE RENJI DOIN THAT TO MY ICHI AGAIN I'LL KILL HIM!

ICHI: I'M NOT YOURS!

SHIRO: YEAH HES MINE.

ME: SHIRO..?

SHIRO: YEAH?

ME:TAKE ICHI TO THE OTHER ROOM AND SHUT HIM UP WICH EVER WAY YOU WANT.

SHIRO: YES SIR! -PICKS UP ICHI- -OPENS DOOR AND CLOSES DOOR-

OH YES ICHI! SUCK IT!

ME: DRAMA QUEENS...UPDATE SOON!

Actually I did see this coming XD

mainly because I've already read the book and I love all of R.L. Stine's works. He's one of my fav writers, and I think you've done a great job !

Cant wait for the next chapter ;)

Well, personally, I didn't see it coming, you've done a good job witht his chapter XD.

/DSP

Ohmygosh! Two Hichigo's! It makes the whole story more awesome! Omg, Stark as a rapist, or whatever they were going to do, I never expected that. Sure, Grimmjow and Nnoitra are hot bastards like that, but Stark? O

Awesome! Hope to see more of them actually. x3

Fox

i love your story! it's just awesome-really well constructed and interesting:D i think you should do more in shiro's pov. i wanna know how he's feeling too! i sorta feel bad for him now though, not knowing what's going on with this alive shiro and having ichi hate him and all. poor shiro!

anyway, update soon!

I didn't see it coming, really...

but I love it...

a new turn in the story...

dira

I like where this is going. _

Cool! Love it.

Wow. Shirosaki and Ichigo met at last. I wonder though how ghost Shirosaki didn't know though.

well, i was more or less expecting that. and i can't wait to see what happens when Ghost!Shiro sees the Alive!Shiro. oh and btw, Alive!Shiro is an ass. XDD but he fits in with the crowd with Nnoitra and Grimmjow. :D way to go, Ichi. XD betting Grimm's gonna have a sore face for a bit. lol and i wonder how Shiro dies? or will he in the first place? will Ichi save him? can't wait to find out!

MORE CONFUSED! T.T

I mean I knew he wasn't dead yet, but still.

Are they going to have another run in or what?

AH! i Don't understand!

so confused! I get it now tho! shiro is mean in the real world aint he

once again, that was a very good chapter and i definitely ddnt dee that coming! what the hell is going on? a living shiro and a a dead shiro? wah!

please UPDATE soon!

CNH

I'm still confused...T.T either you're too good at making this mysterious or I'm being way too stoOpid.

I'm more confused about this, but past confusion is cleared up some what and to answer your last question to me yes you are indeed a dealer of god damn good yaoi fanfiction X3