Oh! I love it!! I really like the way you describe everything ^w^ I can imagine the kiss perfectly, your story is great :D

I'll like to write something about this couple too, but i'm no quite sure what to write about (and I really love the Takumi/Mika relationship too, so i can't decide which one I should choose to write about xD)

Well, that's off topic ^^U

I'd love to see more about this fic, maybe reactions from Takumi's friends or Natsuki coming back to find them, you choose xD this is awesome, great job!

"Thumbs up!"

I believe that this is a nice start for your story, right here! Your writing looks great and the plot looks great. Update it soon and keep it up! (^_^)