 Yellowbulma 2009-09-24 . chapter 1Aww I nearly cried!! So sad and well written. |
 mira19 2009-07-21 . chapter 1 I love the way you capture Henry's thoughts -- the way he believed it was all in the name of love. The flashbacks held such warmth that I really wished it had ended better for Henry. Of course, there couldn't have been any other way to have a happy ending: the killer must die. Love for Abby and Henry <3! |
 sleeplessly 2009-07-20 . chapter 1This is really fantastic! Very bittersweet and moving while still being a bit creepy. I'm very interested in your AU fic! |
 Maggie Moony 2009-07-20 . chapter 1This was a great story! I'm also excited to read your AU story, which is an idea that I've been hoping to read fanfic about. |
 Darc Butterfly 2009-07-19 . chapter 1I lovelovelove this! Great work. |
 Kathryn0505 2009-07-19 . chapter 1This was fantastic! I thought the flashbacks were perfect! I loved the little things (e.g. Henry allowing Abby to win the race). I also think you portrayed Henry's craziness very well! Great job! =] |
 Estrella00 2009-07-19 . chapter 1wow, that was really powerful. I loved it! |