|Reviews for What I Really Want|
| Twink423 12/12/10 . chapter 1
So wonderful and beautiful! I want that Edward... damn he was wonderful. What a great whirlwind romance for these two youngins with so much hope! :D
| ze1uh 12/8/10 . chapter 1
You have such a way with words. Consider me a fan:)
| Zhee 12/5/10 . chapter 1
| mrskebab 10/28/10 . chapter 1
| kitty j 10/20/10 . chapter 1
To the lady in grey,
Oh my! This was lovely, heartwarming, sensual, and hot. I am just starting on your list and I'm really looking forward to it. You writing is vivid and causes tension in all the best places.
| shpwhitney 10/16/10 . chapter 1
Really loved this one-shot, and wish that I had come across your page and your stories earlier! The way you write is so captivating and consuming. I can really feel and relate to the words and the actions of these characters!
| twiquarius 9/30/10 . chapter 1
*sighs* sweet and sexy and wow! :)
| theonlykyla 9/26/10 . chapter 1
why oh why the fuck have I not read this beauty of yours yet? Well, I'm rectifying that situation RIGHT NOW!
This is HOT HOT HOT!
I am a huge fan of yours anway but this was delicious!
Onward I go!
| ethelouise 9/22/10 . chapter 1
Very sexy and sweet.
| Northern Light1000 9/11/10 . chapter 1
| maria2906 9/7/10 . chapter 1
That was sweet!
*sigh* how I miss high school! I'm 26 and yet high school feels so far away! Maybe because we're forced to grow up quicker than we should :)
These emotions that you portray here are so adorable, I can really relate to them when I was at that age!
Those overly strong emotions that dominate your entire being, the innocence and maybe even naivety with which we see and act :) And love and hope, such strong emotions! There is plenty of hope here, and a hint of possible love and future! I love it :)
| EmoryB123 8/31/10 . chapter 1
When the world around us prepared to sleep, we drew our sleeping bags together in the middle of the room, mine below us, his above. We lay on our sides, our conversation never pausing, simply growing quiet in the dark. There was nothing I didn't want to know. - I didn't quite follow this. Was it like a slumber party? I would appreciate knowing.
Good story. Hot Edward (always a good thing!). I think they will be together forever!
| mrstwister712 8/30/10 . chapter 1
I want more of this story. 3
| Indefinable1 8/14/10 . chapter 1
apparently i forgot to post my review - i loved this fic - i love oneshots because they offer us immediate gratification - and i liked this one a lot! you're one of my most favorite authors - hugs
| zen2592 8/2/10 . chapter 1
That was written beautifully. Thank you!