i loved it gr8 job i loved the purple rainbows bit

Definite points for originality here, however it would have been nice to see Misty more in character, rather than (what I assume to be) behaving as you would. If you could blend your unique style and talent for the 1st person POV with a more accurate character interpretation, that would be an awesome fic to read. ]

Holy *BLEEP* that stuff really happened to you? Those were some milkshakes...!
But yay for Pokeshipping! And brownie points for Contest and Ikari too! Cute one/shot!)

Cute story!

This was good... But it was a little... I don't know, ODD for Pokemon. Or, I guess, not so much, 'cause that's how we roll.

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well-written! And you we're/are only 14? either your skilled or i just suck.

also, yo might wanna disable anonymous reviews to avoid flames... yes, such people exist.

great story. kinda thought Dawn would be that type of girl XD and i luv the title "Purple rainbows" XD

This is hilarious. Read it 3 times already and reading it again! Oh, and you were sort of right about Misty; she's 10, but she's a few months older than Ash is.

that is gros! I don't know why i kept reading! seriously, UR an

I think this is a great 's funny and I love the ending.I'm a big pokeshipper.

Oh it's cool! I've never read a fic like that before And Pokéshipping is love 3 Good job I'd like to read more n_n

Haha, that was hilarious! xD

What a wild sleepover...-D

*laugh

hahahahahahahahah!

this story made me augh so hard especially when it talked about their dreams XD

you should really write more stories like this since you are so talented at writing)