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Jen Konoha
2009-12-12 . chapter 8
OMG, I didn't see it get posted! Embarrassed? !!Am I ever!!

OK, it wasn't the romance I was hoping for, it was better. It was not just randomly throwing them together. They remained more in character and form, and close to the time of the first meeting. Since Eve is 15 and Luck is perpetually 18-19 it would be a bit awkward to age her too quick, and then suddenly reunite them.

This way I can imagine them working together "learning..." and growing to a friendship, then more, slowly and more realistically!

Also, I'm happy for Keith and Katie lol, lovely touch.

I'm delighted. This was simply fantastic! I am squealing seriously... not like a piggy... but you know, silly schoolgirl way past college graduation...

Thank you very much! :D
KichigaiKairu
2009-12-12 . chapter 8
Yay, Eve is so cute! :D And I don't mind you writing about Luck all the time...I enjoy it. I liked the first person, it was well done.
Pom Rania
2009-12-10 . chapter 7
OMG, that was Isaac and Miria! And it's exactly the sort of thing they would do.
Anonymous
2009-12-10 . chapter 1
More Luck and Dallas please. Not enough of that good ** out there.
MungoJerry
2009-12-07 . chapter 4
Lol... well, I'm a fan of Chane and Claire, but you've done that already. XD
MungoJerry
2009-12-06 . chapter 1
*scrubs brain with Comet*
Eehcoli
2009-11-13 . chapter 7
I LOVE these ficlets! Just effin brilliant dood! ( " )d
JustShotMarvin
2009-10-25 . chapter 7
"Smile :)"

Didn't get that until a minute or two later and when I did, I smiled a bit myself. Oh, Elmer, you miserable smilejunkie, what ever would we do without you?

Also, delicious Luck and Dallas. I approve.
RageFeline
2009-10-13 . chapter 7
Wow! This story is awesome! In these chapter, I especially loved the hilarious ads and Hetalia reference. I can't wait for more. :D
RageFeline
2009-10-11 . chapter 4
You're really adept at capturing the essence of the characters. I especially loved the oysters part. Bery nice update, I look forward to the ones to come.
RageFeline
2009-10-11 . chapter 3
I liked the Brooklyn accent- one of my favorite thing's about Firo. I'm grateful you mentioned, it becuase I couldn't place it at all. XD
The chapter was very cute and enjoyable. The only advice I can give it to add some more detail to surroundings.
I love this fanfic!
D-chi
2009-10-02 . chapter 4
Love it. So much.
D-chi
2009-10-02 . chapter 3
LOL I love Maiza and Firo. They're so randomly awesome.
KichigaiKairu
2009-09-27 . chapter 7
omigosh, that was brilliant! Dallas answers to peppermints!? And graham killing a kitten...:P and i'm guessint that the mother theresa and ghandi were isaac and miria, right!? :D Excellent. great job.
LadyAssassin27
2009-09-27 . chapter 7
Loved the update. My sides hurt from laughing, at the image of Issac and Miria dressed as Gandhi and Mother Teresa.
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