 Jen Konoha 2009-12-12 . chapter 8OMG, I didn't see it get posted! Embarrassed? !!Am I ever!!
OK, it wasn't the romance I was hoping for, it was better. It was not just randomly throwing them together. They remained more in character and form, and close to the time of the first meeting. Since Eve is 15 and Luck is perpetually 18-19 it would be a bit awkward to age her too quick, and then suddenly reunite them.
This way I can imagine them working together "learning..." and growing to a friendship, then more, slowly and more realistically!
Also, I'm happy for Keith and Katie lol, lovely touch.
I'm delighted. This was simply fantastic! I am squealing seriously... not like a piggy... but you know, silly schoolgirl way past college graduation...
Thank you very much! :D |
 KichigaiKairu 2009-12-12 . chapter 8Yay, Eve is so cute! :D And I don't mind you writing about Luck all the time...I enjoy it. I liked the first person, it was well done. |
 Pom Rania 2009-12-10 . chapter 7OMG, that was Isaac and Miria! And it's exactly the sort of thing they would do. |
 Anonymous 2009-12-10 . chapter 1 More Luck and Dallas please. Not enough of that good ** out there. |
 MungoJerry 2009-12-07 . chapter 4Lol... well, I'm a fan of Chane and Claire, but you've done that already. XD |
 MungoJerry 2009-12-06 . chapter 1*scrubs brain with Comet* |
 Eehcoli 2009-11-13 . chapter 7 I LOVE these ficlets! Just effin brilliant dood! ( " )d |
 JustShotMarvin 2009-10-25 . chapter 7"Smile :)"
Didn't get that until a minute or two later and when I did, I smiled a bit myself. Oh, Elmer, you miserable smilejunkie, what ever would we do without you?
Also, delicious Luck and Dallas. I approve. |
 RageFeline 2009-10-13 . chapter 7Wow! This story is awesome! In these chapter, I especially loved the hilarious ads and Hetalia reference. I can't wait for more. :D |
 RageFeline 2009-10-11 . chapter 4You're really adept at capturing the essence of the characters. I especially loved the oysters part. Bery nice update, I look forward to the ones to come. |
 RageFeline 2009-10-11 . chapter 3I liked the Brooklyn accent- one of my favorite thing's about Firo. I'm grateful you mentioned, it becuase I couldn't place it at all. XD
The chapter was very cute and enjoyable. The only advice I can give it to add some more detail to surroundings.
I love this fanfic! |
 D-chi 2009-10-02 . chapter 4Love it. So much. |
 D-chi 2009-10-02 . chapter 3LOL I love Maiza and Firo. They're so randomly awesome. |
 KichigaiKairu 2009-09-27 . chapter 7omigosh, that was brilliant! Dallas answers to peppermints!? And graham killing a kitten...:P and i'm guessint that the mother theresa and ghandi were isaac and miria, right!? :D Excellent. great job. |
 LadyAssassin27 2009-09-27 . chapter 7Loved the update. My sides hurt from laughing, at the image of Issac and Miria dressed as Gandhi and Mother Teresa. |