|Reviews for Ashes in the Wind|
| Heksie 8/14/11 . chapter 21
Love the fic.
| Penny is wise 8/9/11 . chapter 21
Pretty good story.
| Nenefee 8/6/11 . chapter 12
I don't quite get it: in an earlier chapter Harry said he'd be safe after he graduated and turned seventeen because then they could neither remove him from the US and nor bond him..? but now they are actually waiting for Harry's birthday? I thought they wanted to find him before because he was a minor and someone else could give his consent, but if they wait then Harry's legally an adult and would've to do it himself, which he wouldn't.
| DawnScarlet19610 8/5/11 . chapter 1
Just because Cedric and Edward were both played by the same person, doesn't mean they're supposed to look alike. Their character features are really different and it really annoys me when people do that.
| Rory 8/1/11 . chapter 1
I don't like Twilight that much but this is very good! The main reason I don't like Twilgith is because of Bella, so this helps.
| spk 7/26/11 . chapter 21
Just discovered this and I LOVED it! My heart broke though when Snape & Poppy were killed. :)
| dead feather 7/5/11 . chapter 5
While I've enjoyed Harry settling down and the baby being very cute and all :) I still think that this is taking far too long setting the stage, so to speak.
Not knowing things, like who c-j is and what happened in britain and what has happened to Harry, not knowing these doesn't make me want to read further. It's just making this all somewhat frustrating to read and I'm starting to nit-pick the characters and plot.
Kudos for writing and finishing this, maybe one day your muse is inspiring you to do some editing. But at this point I think it's time for me to sign off. Just wanted to list why though there are good things in this story loads.
| dead feather 7/5/11 . chapter 2
Is c-j Teddy in disguise?
I like how you have this story told from Harry point of view mostly. But there are a lot of things that are being hinted at and it kinda bothers reading this that there are so many of them. Like what happened in Britain, when did Harry meet Esme, who is c-j, why couldn't harry use magic in us etc.
I also wondered what was the point of changing Jessica's name? The girl Harry met at school was obviously Jess, just with a different name. I first thought it would be something interesting but then it just went to the cullen explanation scene like usual.
Another thing was Esme, in the books its made pretty clear that the coven sticks together and they talk about their days a lot. Esme seeing this strange kid for days and telling him their secret would be a huge no-no for the others not to know as they said in school.
| Autumn Skyie 6/27/11 . chapter 18
Darn you! Why must you continue to play with my emotions like this? *Pouts and wipes away a tear* Edward and Harry are so sweet together. :3
| sp 6/25/11 . chapter 21
love your story, thank you
| scorpionika 4/27/11 . chapter 21
Sweetest and fluffiest ending ever XD
Love your story, especially the bit with a bully and a bullied *_
| Vicki219 4/3/11 . chapter 21
| slythernightowl 3/28/11 . chapter 21
Wow! i know it's been a couple of years since you finished this but i have to say it...this was probably the best twilight/hp xcrossover i've ever had the pleasure of reading. the writing was first class, the characters were excellently portrayed, and i didnt even mind that d.d. was the villain! haha. in all honestly, edward in canon bugs the crap out of me, but his protective inclinations were well received in this story. great work! i shall peruse your other fics.
| Nitrea 2/10/11 . chapter 21
AAAAAWWWWWW! That was soooo cute! I love it! :3
-Love Nitrea ;)
| yngoldfogee 1/10/11 . chapter 21
Loved the story and looking forward to reading the sequel now and hoping you can follow up with the second sequel as well.