Dad and Jin... Aw, I love it!

It was so cute seeing how Akutsu became progressively more attached to Taichi and his daughter. The fact that Akutsu is so...not parental just made it all the more comical and ironic. Yay! ^_^

so cu~te x3

Aww...Any chance of more of Rika?

This was perfect! I love that you gave Taichi some independence from Jin, eve at the price of being a single father abandoned by his wife. I love that he has a daughter as opposed to a son, and that this story is just so damn perfect! I hope you write more of this pairing soon! Thanks!

-giggle- Oh my god, this story was ADORABLE! I think you wrote Akutsu nearly completely in character (nearly because I believe no one can write them completely in character accept for the manga writer/writer) and I just plain old loved it! Those last two lines were fabulous!

I liked how slowly he got used to having Dan and his daughter around. He was a gonner from the start lol (no matter how gruff he was it made no never mind, they weren't fazed).

lol at: The the lady not wanting to hand over Rika to Jin. When he bought the doll (teehee ritual sacrifice)and when Dan kissed him & he mumbled for him to make the damn cake.

awwed when he couldn't find it in him to push Dan away when he was falling asleep in bed and the end him thinking Maybe he could live with that. Nice fic.

Yay~! AkutsuxTachi! Or something like that, anyway. XD And a bit of critique: I find you have a couple of long run-on sentences this time round that could use more punctuation...

Say this one:
Only for the food, and only because Taichi would have hunted him down otherwise, and besides even if listening to Taichi go on about some stupid brats he didn't even know was rather different from going out to drink with some of his less idiotic co-workers at least it saved him money.

Maybe you could have used "...and besides[,] even if...was rather different [than] going out to drink... idiotic co-workers[,] at least it saved him money."

And this one:
His stories rarely went exactly as they were written down in the books, and sometimes included words that made Taichi glance at him somewhat more sharply than usual, but Taichi never told him to stop and besides Rika-chan giggled when the wicked witch ate the idiotic kids who trespassed on her property so obviously it couldn't be quite that bad now could it.

This part needs a bit of punctuation work too... "...him to stop[,] and besides[,] Rika-chan giggled... her property[,] so obviously... that bad[,] now could it[?]"

Other than that, I like your story~!! ^_^ Yay for Akutsu and Tachi~!