Yout story is really good. I loved it!

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Good story! I have to agree with what Gulogirl said though, Lupin does say Voldemort and not you-know-who. Tonks' line, "Our time is short" almost made me cry. Their time was way too short. The end was funny. I can somehow see Molly saying that. :)

that ending was so funny very awkwrd but soo funny

Given his injuries, Remus shouldn't have been up for any ahem, strenous activity... but I'm not really complaining about that. Molly's reaction was amusing though. One nitpick though - Remus is one of the people who says Voldemort instead of any of the you know who nonsense. And since this obviously during the HBP ear, the Death Eaters haven't put the taboo on the name as yet so no reason for him to avoid saying it.

Aw ur story was SO cute and a delightful read.

Molly is so hilarious. XD

Lupin x Tonks are such and adorable couple

Awesome job!

haha i love it, oh molly lol!