Cruel wench. Took this idea from me Kidding, I swear! but really, good POV. The last part was heart breaking. Very good, Missus Zac)

Well, I noticed only one typo. "Did you ever wonder why your heart still beat?" It should be "beats". And as for the fic, I like it much! _ Very excellently written! It's really good! I hope to see more fics by ya!

That was...different. Different but nice.

OOOhhh...i like!...lulu and auron!

Okay, this is just awesome. It's totally, very well done, and I love it to death. So I say this out of total love for you work- WRITE MORE!:

YES! May I be the first person to tell you I love you? Err.. Yaaay for Auron/Luluness! I actually tried to write one, but it turned into a poorly written lemon, and I'm too chicken shizznits to post it

not bad.. i like how Auron's not really dead. But what about poor Wakka?