 PedroCullenBloomTM 2009-12-18 . chapter 13Wow, this story is awesome. Poor Darren, getting picked on by drunks. I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon please! |
 witty kitty01 2009-11-29 . chapter 13i just found this today... i looked at when you last updated... you've abandoned it have'nt you? :( |
 VampirePrince4ever 2009-10-28 . chapter 13like this story...hope there is another chapter someday.. |
 Liz Lance 2009-10-02 . chapter 13 I love the idea, but I have to agree with Vampire-At-Heart. It could be better. Is there a plot line? |
 Vampire-At-Heart 2009-10-02 . chapter 13 its ok. it could be better. luv the idea, though! |
 Sina Riddle 2009-08-02 . chapter 8Dude! The vampire thing.. its so in your face!
"Im a half vampire", blah blah blah, "I drink blood", blah blah. Dude, we know! |
 Battle Axe 2009-07-29 . chapter 2 Allo Allo!
you are doing an impressive job here with the sotry keep it up aand keep going - write for your own enjoyment. :D guess i certainly enjoyed reading it and will continue to do so if you write more. |
 AlisonB93 2009-07-27 . chapter 13I love this story!
Its like, the perfect crossover, :D,
Can't wait till the next chapter :) |
 Damaged Zero 2009-07-24 . chapter 13cool update |
 Talking-Rock 2009-07-22 . chapter 1YOU NEVER SAID PERMENANT DELETEAGE THIS CANT BE SO, NO DELETEING |
 SinJam 2009-07-20 . chapter 9And, here we have, the handsome, fearless, annoying, wonderfull...
LARTEN CREPSLEY! -Fangirl squal--
Ok I am done, moving on...
I haven't reviewed for some chapters, have I? How mean of me. But I haven't had anything new to say and the clock is nearing 11pm too quiqly...
But I am gonna continue now... |
 SinJam 2009-07-20 . chapter 5Now you have done it.
Where is Darren's suspious attidute? Or the fact that he is afraid that he could kill the humans in accident?
And let's not forget that the *G*olden trio is full of nosy brats.
Don't take this wrong, I want to help you, which is why I tell ytou those things. Try to keep them in chacrather. If you want to read some other fics or evevn the books to see how other people make them act. --I am one to say, I can't do it myself -.-U --
Now I go foward again! |
 SinJam 2009-07-20 . chapter 3Hmmh...
I still thonk you should describe the surroundings a bit more, and not make Darren too emotional and suprised by everything...
And here I go again...
...Hopefully I will be finished quiqly. I have to go to work tomorrow :´C |
 SinJam 2009-07-20 . chapter 2Hi!
I had to review, because I don't want anyone to delete their story just because people are too stupid.
There isn't many Darren Shan/ Harry Potter crossovers, so I think it's great that you had the guts to write one!
But now to the critic... I like your story for now, but I whis you could write more than just dialogue. And this is my personal option-- I don't like first persons POV that much. But it's your style --And the Books are written from Darren's POV, but, I will be a bastard and not remember it ;P
I haven't read whuther yet, but I hope you wont make Harry and Darren hit off immediadly. Harry bis an idiot, nosy and a brat. I don't like him that much --I think you guessed it already-
But if you did.. Oh well! It's your story, I just think those things take time.
But I wiuld prefer if they didn't become friends at all. I just don't think that it's possible.
But, now I have to go to read whuther.
Bye! |