 Doubleblade Miriko 3/16/11 . chapter 1So, you're probaply now womdering how I dug up this fic and the answer is simple: looking through each and every Sephiroth fic there is. I don't know if you like him anymore or if your as obsessed now as you were then, but this is still good stuff.
You have managed to capture Seph's charecter pretty nicely, the cynisim is just so much like him and the katas... Beautiful, I've read many theories on how he got Masamune and this is one of the most original ones, usually people write that he got it from Wutai or something like that. There is really nothing to analyze in here, I just like this, period.
I'm sure you have learned to write English better by now, but there really wasn't any crushing mistakes in here, just those normals I do too, being a person whose native language isn't English either. But, I like this, this is going to my favs and there is nothing bad in being obsessed with Sephiroth, I'm too. Thank you for this! |
 Gigei 8/25/06 . chapter 1That was a very good slice of life/oneshot on Sephiroth's childhood. I enjoyed it, especially the part where he does his katas.) |
 Silver Chaotic 3/1/04 . chapter 1Yes, you are maybe a little obsessed. Your English is brilliant. I love your stories and style of writing! |
 doc 6/15/03 . chapter 1 I'm not really a fan of ff7 or the fanfiction on that topic, but for some strange reason, I do love Seph. I think you wrote him brilliantly. And, trust me, I've read worse grammatical errors in stories by people who supposedly know English as a first language. Very nice. |
 Bachy A 4/5/03 . chapter 1Hey, this is really good. I'm a Sephiroth maniac, too, so I understand exactly where you're coming from well done, and honestly, no worries about your English as many have said, it's better than the English used by many Americans. |
 Noacat 3/31/03 . chapter 1I like this! I hope you plan to continue. It'd be an interesting chronical of Sephiroth's early life. And don't worry about your commas, my commas suck entirely and english is my mother tongue. |
 The Jack of Spades 3/3/03 . chapter 1Yeah, another Sephiroth fangirl! Whoo! I love to write about him a lot myself. (Grandpa Sephiroth? LOL! I guess I'd like to see that
Really, your grammar was actually very good in this. I didn't see any serious problems or anything. And your characterizations of Hojo, Heidegger, Scarlet, the even Seph himself were very well done. And the background history of the clever. I like it. This is an excellent fic. Brava! |
 Emily 2/8/03 . chapter 1 Hey, this was excellent! Much more believable than some corny ones where he finds it in a cave or something. I can't find anything wrong with your spelling and grammer.. sure there is the occasional mistake here and there, but thats kinda hard to avoid with a long chapter like this, unless you read over it 100 times just to make sure _ |
 Neko Kuroban 11/21/02 . chapter 1This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read, and I have definately read over a hundred at least. And don't worry about your English skills! You're writing's about ten times better than most American's. |
 Firestarter 10/22/02 . chapter 1a excellent sword is hard to come by... and dont worry you write better english than most brit's |
 Chocobo Goddess 8/2/02 . chapter 1This is a beautiful story about a less-talked-about part of Sephiroth's life. I have been enjoying Reflect the Sky all along; I hope you decide to write more about young Seph as well! *wark* |
 Daleeria 7/16/02 . chapter 1I loved the story. gammer was bad but I'm not the best in grammer either. But I still enjoyed it. you should add on more chapters. |
 cjchan 3/4/02 . chapter 1Thats really good, I don't think anyone has done a story about how Sephy got his sword before _ |
 KrystalClear 1/1/02 . chapter 1This fic doesn't have that many mistakes... in fact, it's one of the better ones! Your grammars and stuff aren't bad at all, so I hope you continue to write. I LOVE SEPHIROTH and would really like to see more fics like this where they glorify him haha well write more! |
 Marie 1/1/02 . chapter 1 I love it! Your English is almost perfect. You're an excellent writer! This one is definitely going in my "favorites" section! |