 Cat Yuy 2009-12-11 . chapter 5Thanks for the b-day wishes.
HIRO & ANDO!
Can't wait for more |
 Angelic Ami 2009-12-07 . chapter 4Loved how you've kept things as good as usual and the time shifts are brilliant. It's hard to keep everyone in character in these fics, so well done to you and I hope to read more soon. |
 the s33r 2009-12-03 . chapter 4I really love the shifting timelines in this fic. it's just like watching the actual show. and KUDOS to your portrayal of the characters. You've got them all perfect. I really love how you've written the relationships between each other the characters; they're so deep and complex, yet you can understand where everyone is coming from.
You've taken the show, and put it down on paper in a way that could only please the most die-hard Heroes fans.
Well done. |
 Cat Yuy 2009-12-03 . chapter 4YIPPEE FOR AN UPDATE
I love it as usual.
Am glad to see Zach there .
I'll think of this as an early b-day (12-09)gift to myself |
 Lemomina 2009-09-15 . chapter 3My only problem with this chapter is that Peter doesn't seem to be sad that he lost his wife when his daughter exploded ! Yeah he got distracted but still .
I would love to know what was the fate of Mohinder & Elle , wasn't she supposed to be with Gabriel in Odessa ?! Honestly , I hope she wasn't :)
Characters i would like to read more about : The Grays ( I'm 100% biased ) , I would love to see more Noah Gray , I hope he gets fixed soon XD , The Petrellis (Mainly Angela ) , The Parkmans , Mohinder & Micah , Also i would love more Audery / Syelle interactions .
Wow, Long review is Really Long
I hope you haven't given up on the story ( i noticed you haven't update for a long time ) and I hope you update soon :) |
 Angelic Ami 2009-09-07 . chapter 3I can't believe this started ages ago! Dammit! Loving the first few opening chapters so far, seems like Hannah's a big trouble to Peter and Claire already. With everything that's going on, will Nathan be on to Peter, Claire and Hannah? Please update again soon! |
 Cat Yuy 2009-08-19 . chapter 3Dearest Creedog VanDrey,
I love how you are moving this along.
I'll just list characters I'd love to see more of: Claude, Zach, Micha/Molly and Elle/Gabriel.
Plus flashbacks and flashfowards.
In other words, if you keep writing this, I'll keep reading it.
TTFN,
catyuy |
 Cat Yuy 2009-08-08 . chapter 2I'm still very happy to see more of this series.
I love how you build upon things. |
 heroesatheart124 2009-07-20 . chapter 1Yay! I'm glad it seems to be working out well for you. I hope the good reviews continue. It really is a great story. (Can't wait for next chapter!) |
 BloomingSparrow 2009-07-20 . chapter 1Ooh...I've been waiting for this ever since "The World Entire" ended! Seems to be good, can't wait for the next chapter... |
 Cat Yuy 2009-07-20 . chapter 1YIPPEE! |