This is a really good short story, the description is briliant. I like the way you you got into the Pokemon's head and showed all of its feelings. You are definitely one of the best authors whose work I have read.

This was a nice story, and I look forward to others like it. It's got a nice sound to it, and your descriptions are wonderful. I don't think I saw anything wrong with it, and Suicune was nicely done.

Lookin' more from you!-Banzai

Don't over-describe. PLEASE.

Pretty. Portrays the Lengendaries in a new light. You're great at describing things, you can really see the scene. Write on!

_ Excellent portrayal of Suicine. Well done!

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okies, this one was REALLY good, the imagary was AWESOME, and the descrptions were terrific, i could actually see the whole suicune sceene infront of me, so really good job with that.

There's not anything really i would say to improve, just an overall good job! keep up the good work!

That was pretty cool.
Good job! Some people certainly do not write well, but man, you're not one of them.

Cooler

This is tremendous. Your phrasing in describing how it moves, shifts forms, dances... shares a contageous mood of effortless power. you are skilled.

That was a cool story...umm...yup... so...yeah...umm...

Description: Beautiful

Plot: Beautiful

Pokemon: Beautiful

Story: BEE-U-TEE-FUL!

This is cool do you know just how much I love the legendaries?

Nice description.
My little brother likes the point of view