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| Poison Dusk 2003-04-20 ch 1,  | abuseThis is a really good short story, the description is briliant. I like the way you you got into the Pokemon's head and showed all of its feelings. You are definitely one of the best authors whose work I have read. |
| Banzai Ryu 2003-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was a nice story, and I look forward to others like it. It's got a nice sound to it, and your descriptions are wonderful. I don't think I saw anything wrong with it, and Suicune was nicely done. Lookin' more from you! -Banzai |
| Cadmuse 2002-12-08 ch 1, | abuseDon't over-describe. PLEASE. |
| Miss Black Dragon 2002-05-25 ch 1, | abusePretty. Portrays the Lengendaries in a new light. You're great at describing things, you can really see the scene. Write on! |
| Kender Bard 2002-05-10 ch 1, | abuse^_^ Excellent portrayal of Suicine. Well done! |
| Ketchum 2002-05-04 ch 1, anon. | abusenot logged in again. lo siento! okies, this one was REALLY good, the imagary was AWESOME, and the descrptions were terrific, i could actually see the whole suicune sceene infront of me, so really good job with that. There's not anything really i would say to improve, just an overall good job!!!!! keep up the good work! |
| Muk and Grimer . The C Team 2002-03-30 ch 1, | abuseThat was pretty cool. :) Good job! Some people certainly do not write well, but man, you're not one of them. ~Cooler |
| Soliloquy Addams 2002-03-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is tremendous. Your phrasing in describing how it moves, shifts forms, dances... shares a contageous mood of effortless power. you are skilled. |
| Chad 2002-02-03 ch 1, | abuseThat was a cool story...umm...yup... so...yeah....umm... |
| Lightning-Strike 2002-01-25 ch 1, | abuseDescription: Beautiful Plot: Beautiful Pokemon: Beautiful Story: BEE-U-TEE-FUL!! |
| Ni'khali/Karra 2002-01-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is cool - do you know just how much I love the legendaries? |
| anieveIII 2001-12-31 ch 1, | abuseNice description. My little brother likes the point of view |