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Poison Dusk 4/20/03 . chapter 1
This is a really good short story, the description is briliant. I like the way you you got into the Pokemon's head and showed all of its feelings. You are definitely one of the best authors whose work I have read.
Banzai Ryu 2/21/03 . chapter 1
This was a nice story, and I look forward to others like it. It's got a nice sound to it, and your descriptions are wonderful. I don't think I saw anything wrong with it, and Suicune was nicely done.

Lookin' more from you!-Banzai
Cadmuse 12/8/02 . chapter 1
Don't over-describe. PLEASE.
Miss Black Dragon 5/25/02 . chapter 1
Pretty. Portrays the Lengendaries in a new light. You're great at describing things, you can really see the scene. Write on!
Kender Bard 5/10/02 . chapter 1
_ Excellent portrayal of Suicine. Well done!
Ketchum 5/4/02 . chapter 1
not logged in again. lo siento!

okies, this one was REALLY good, the imagary was AWESOME, and the descrptions were terrific, i could actually see the whole suicune sceene infront of me, so really good job with that.

There's not anything really i would say to improve, just an overall good job! keep up the good work!
Muk and Grimer . The C Team 3/30/02 . chapter 1
That was pretty cool.
Good job! Some people certainly do not write well, but man, you're not one of them.

Cooler
Soliloquy Addams 3/2/02 . chapter 1
This is tremendous. Your phrasing in describing how it moves, shifts forms, dances... shares a contageous mood of effortless power. you are skilled.
Chad 2/3/02 . chapter 1
That was a cool story...umm...yup... so...yeah...umm...
Lightning-Strike 1/25/02 . chapter 1
Description: Beautiful

Plot: Beautiful

Pokemon: Beautiful

Story: BEE-U-TEE-FUL!
Ni'khaliKarra 1/3/02 . chapter 1
This is cool do you know just how much I love the legendaries?
anieveIII 12/31/01 . chapter 1
Nice description.
My little brother likes the point of view
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