Really quick note. "His most obedient and LOYAL soldiers..." not 'loyalist' at the end of chapter 1. Otherwise, this is looking really good.

I'm not guessing cause I know I'll get it wrong anyway. So I'll let someone else do it for this awsome fic.

C.D.

well i think its Prime or Prowl wow this is a great chapter i love how you written Sides and Hot Rod. its awesome i can't wait for the next chapter :D

optimus?

I'm really enjoying this. I like how you write Sides. And It's good to see a Bayformer Sideswipe story lol.
Can't wait to see if Sunny finds his way into it.

Cheers,

--theSarcasticWench
xx

Very good. Nice show of emotion, especially paired with the story. I do hope we see Sunstreaker's appearance at some point.

Great chapter!

Loving it as always. You are one of the top TF authors I will ever read good fics from. So I have to bow down to your awsome writing.

C.D.

Well I hope that your muse decides not to go on strike anymore. Cause this is too much of an awsome fic for a muse to go on strike.

C.D.

awe this is a great set of stories i can't wait to read the next one:D

Cool story!!

Anything with Sides' is cool. Angsty Sides is rather awesome. Kinda wonderin' what movie you mentioned... I also like his habit of talking to inanimate objects, makes him more... real (kinda wanna say human but well...DUH)

Really enjoyed all these chapters, looking forward to seeing more.

aw poor sideswipe... I couldnt figure out why he was in ROTF but there was no sunstreaker... oh well i like all of these there very good cant wait till next time:D

sideswipe! i love him so much! i thought about doing a jealous twin thing like this after seeing the movie, but i just feel like i wouldnt be able to get the wording right, since im just getting back into the swing of transformers. but thank you for the love! he does need a lot of attention, poor bot. *hugz* and he was my fav too. lol, and my current comp background. i love the story, it really did dive into who he is and how he's changed. just one question that i've been wondering since ive been reading a few of these; did they switch sunny and sides personalites? i thought that sides was the more happy-go-lucky one and sunny the more serious? i can understand the trama of them being seperated... did they just do a bit of a redo of personality for the movie? im not complaining, just wondering.
lots of love! and thank you again for writting!