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“Intriguing, yess,” as Megatron might say. I’ve encountered two varied versions of my favorite CG-cartoon today, that a thrill. “Other Vengeance” had the quantum surge turn the cast of characters into humans, and mixed up the gender lines as well. At least yours only fiddled with one character, and I have to say in an entirely convincing, plausible manner. You obviously did your research and have the entire cast in character and I have to admit that while it pains me not to have the studly Predacon strutting around, his ‘femme’ form is growing on me. I’m looking very forward to reading the rest- And Thank you for still sticking with the Beast Wars universe even though the series ended 10 years ago. We writers are few and far between! Keep up the great writing!

Hmm, I'd give the M-rated scene a shot. You wrote the kiss really well, after all.

Much as I loathe gender-bender stories, I have to admit this one avoids the usual traps of assuming Dinobot would be weaker or softer in any way as a "female". Mind, I still think the chapters could do without constantly dropping the word "femme" as a reminder and that "warrior" would function perfectly well as before without adding the "-ess", but all in all, Dinobot being a femme is handled tactfully and realistically. As for the passion with Rattrap, I was fanning the air as I read that. He damn near overloaded right then and there. o_O

Did Rattrap have the hots for Dinobot before the gender revelation, too, or did I miss that somewhere? Considering he mostly loves her for her personality, I wouldn't see why not.

Holy crud! Cudos to you for this chapter. I was completely caught off gaurd when Dinobot kissed Rattrap! And so deeply too. Except for the part where she was drugged, we haven't seen any proof until now that she had feelings for the vermin.

I kinda want to hear a scene from Dinbot's pov-- find out what's going on in that head of hers. As for the mature rating, i think it would be okay as long as it isn't just for some hot n' heavy sex scene. But that's just my opinion. I'm more of the "less sex, more romance" type of reader

They kissed! I wouldn't mind an in-depth love scene as long as it isn't mindless sex and there's some meaningfulness to it. For the next chapter, they should at least talk this thing through, like what they want in this relationship.

Have fun roasting in Thailand!

Oh, wow. Genderbender fics have long been a guilty pleasure of mine, but they've rarely been as enjoyable.

I'm pretty new to the BW fandom, having only been introduced to Transformers in general by the Animated series, but I have to say you're giving me reasons to stick around and look deeper.

I haven't seen the series, only read the character profiles online, but your writing certainly captures my initial feel of the characters. Even Dinobot, having gone through some... redefining, is entirely recognizable. Too many writers try to feminise their chosen character too much, often losing some of the character's essential persona in the process, but you seem to have avoided that pitfall entirely. I salute you.

And... there's Rattrap. There's just something so utterly fulfilling about seeing a less-than-heroic character save the day. We're all cheering for the underdogs somewhere deep down, aren't we?
And again, you manage to stay true to the character. Just 'cause Rattrap is the main character doesn't mean he can suddenly whoop Megatron hand-to-hand. No, he's doing it his way. The sneaky way. That's what we love about him, isn't it?

Besides, I've always been an absolute sucker for mismatched couples, and it doesn't get much odder than Rat' and Dino'. Do give a shot at writing that full love scene, ok? ;)

Oh, and BTW, if you feel like replying to this comment, I'd recommend you do it via DeviantArt. (I'm under the same name there.) 's bein' dick and not letting me update my e-mail address for some reason. >:(

"It may or may not be posted under a revised M rating. I so badly want to try my hand at an in-depth love scene, but I’m still toying around with the idea. Any thoughts?"

Just their kissing is making me think I need a cold shower... you might overload someone with a complete scene! :)

Yeah! Dinobot and Rattrap kissed!

Oh what will happen now in the next chapter? Will they be embaressed to even be in the same room with each other? (And since that will be this stories final chapter will they bond? I hope I hope!)

Have a great trip! Don't forget to have fun and put on some sunscreen!

Loved it keep going. Plz do an in depth love scene.

Aw, they kissed! ^_^

I have to admit, I wasn't sure if I was going to enjoy a fic that included a femme-version of Dinobot (he's just so brutally masculine, lol). But somehow you've managed to stay true to Dinobot's character despite the gender-switch. Moreover, you've managed to stay true to the dynamics between Rattrap and Dinobot. All in all, I've really enjoyed this story thus far and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Oh, and I am totally all for an in-depth love scene if you choose to write one ;D

This was quite simply amazing. As usual, your portrayal of the characters is brilliant and I'm continually amazed at how seamlessly you've connected the Old Dinobot with the new Fem!Dinobot into one completely badass character.

Have a great Christmas holiday and enjoy yourself in Thailand, I've heard its absolutely gorgeous there. I know I'm looking forward to the next (and last) chapter, and hopefully to the sequel which will, no doubt, be every bit as brilliant as Masters of Their Fate.

Happy Holidays,

Kara

Well, that was a satisfying chapter ;D Little sad that the next chapter will be the last. Will there be a sequel?

The last chapter? -is sad- Ah well. All good things must end, I guess, though I'd really rather they didn't... I guess I can always re-read, right?

Muwaha! Guess Dinobot likes Rattrap back, eh? Are we ever going to see her point of view? So far it's been everyone BUT Dinobot.

And nice makeout scene. Made me grin.

This story has yet to disapoint, it is most excellent. As for what would be nice to see in the next chapter, let's have Dinobots thoughts on whatjust happened between her and Rattrap.

Woot! Dinobot's going to get help! She just had to attack everybody first... and she even continues to insult Rattrap in her drugged state! ^_^