I cried. This was so beautiful.
When I review I usually try to give suggestions for improvement, but I have nothing to say here. This is honestly the best Luke-centric story I have ever read and simply incredible in general. I adored each and every line. The tie-in to the Robert Frost poem was perfect. (I'm such a poetry geek. I saw this story in a list on someone's Favorites and chose to read it because of the title.
Really, this was incredible. I want to go back and read it again. (And again, and again...) I love Luke so much and GAH this story was amazing.

I cried so much. I'm still crying. I love Luke. He is a hero. Youre one of the best writers here on FanFiction. It's so tragic.

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Very well done. The processes in Luke's head were very genuine.

You wrote lukes emotions great. Nice job! I wish thalia was with luke at the end though.. Sighhh(

utterly. amazing.

Very well written; you've done a fantastic job of writing Luke's story and thoughts. His and Thalia's relationship was just heartbreaking.

Wow. That was really intense. Intensely GOOD, I mean. I loved it. I'm actually just getting started in the PJO fandom, and this was a great start! Gaaahhh! It was amazing.

This made me cry. I'm serious. I'm crying right now. This was amazing.

I LOVE THIS

amazing.

ugh this is so beautiful oh my god this is perfect

I'm such a sap. I cried.
You're amazing. I have no more words to decribe what I just read, what you wrote. I'm awed.
Well, let's just say that now my keyboard is stained by a Luke's tear.
Cuz Luke is beast like that.
I love this. I love youuuuu...

I'm such a sap. I cried.
You're amazing. I have no more words to decribe what I just read, what you wrote. I'm awed.
Well, let's just say that now my keyboard is stained by a Luke's tear.
Cuz Luke is beast like that.
I love this. I love youuuuu...

Hell! You deserve to be a published author! This was so excellent, and seemed very IC.

that was very good- it made me cry.