I just came across this story and wow, it's great. I miss Max so much and I loved how you wrote about everyone grieving over him. Brilliant.

I have the cd and this is a song i would never play at a furnel cause it would only make the mood darken.

oh em ge! im like totally crying right now!

How's that for an obnoxious reviewer? Haha! Anyway sis, nice job. I just have one suggestion. I don't think that Jace choking back tears is in character. I understand how it works with the rest of the story, but it seems a bit out of place to me.

carrie

Perfect. Never change this. It is perfect.

This made me cry so much. It's so beautifully written, and the song fits it so perfectly. Great job!

Izzy XD (this is faved)

that is simply one of the most beautiful/touching/sad things I've ever read. Seriously, I'm about to cry right now. It was so sincere.
Izzy