Wow...really WOW! I am beyond blown away at how wonderful this fic only thing is I love Race and Jessie(they are my fav characters) and I was wondering why there is so little of Race in here?I would like to see more of Race's struggles and maybe some father/daughter flashbacks.(I'm sorry,I really am a sucker for them.) I know it has been 5 years but maybe someday you could finish because this is WAY too good not to be finished. I will be here...

Jessie was married? Dang, I didn't even think of that possibility. Well played I must say. And she's an artist in Paris now. It's funny to picture her like that since she was always into science and technology before this happened to her, but it makes sense. She's practically a completely different person, although she does seem to have nightmares or some sort of the night Rage kidnapped her. The flashback was hilarious! That's how I picture
jonny, Jessie, and Hadji acting together growing up lol I'm really getting into this story)

Poor Jonny and co., Jessie's been missing for 13 years and they think she's long dead ;_; I'm assuming that Siann in really Jessie with amnesia or something. Guess I'll have to keep reading to find out for sure though Neela's and Hadji's plan to get Jonny to take a break from his own work was pretty clever lol So far I am pleased with your writing style. There's nothing worse than a good plot that is written out poorl Thankful you seem to be developing an interesting and gripping plot and you are conveying it to the reader well.

Wow, what an intriguing start to your story. I love the whole Ezekiel Rage/Jessie ordeal, it was an interesting concept and the Rage eps were always interesting. I'm very excited to read more of this story but I'm also sad b/c it hasn't been updated in quite a few years which makes me worry that it won't be finishe hope that's not the case!

Please Please Please finish this!

It's been a long time since I last read this piece and it still strikes me as one of the most brilliant JQ Fics ever written! Hey Akane-Rei! I hope you're still considering to finish this, because I want to see the end! _.

Wow. Just found this story and fell in love with it. I noticed it's been a while since it's been updated. Any chance you'll pick it back up again. I think it'd be great if you did. If ya need a beta, i'm here! Email me.

Wow this is really good! I would really like to read more. Any possibility that you will continue it?

This is...well, I normally don't like stories that go "off the beaten track", but this is amazing. The characterization is great and the attention to detail is magnificent.
The only thing I would change is that occasionally you slip into present tense when you should use past tense (example"Hands which could not save his world. Hands which can do nothing even now but bleed." The 2nd sentence should be "Hands which *could* do nothing even now...
Excellent job thus far!

Ciao,

Ivy)

Girl!

PLEASE CARRY ON!

ITS EXCELLENT!

Just looking so forward to it!

Wow! Has it really been a year since the last update? J/K. It's also been that long since I took a bit to read the story. I love it, even have it in my faves list. Keep up the good work.

Really makes me wonder what's gonna happen when Jessie gets her memory back and if Johnny can love her as she is. Probably, being Johnny. But hey, we'll all find out, I guess.

Glad to know our friend Jon is changing female opinions about Americans one foreign woman at a time. God bless you my brave brother!

Anyway this has got to be one of the better stories on that I've read. You got the flash backs working, reveal the story as you go, and handle the internal conflicts with ease. Very well done. Seeing the two kids now drifting towards each other was also a nice touch. Should be interesting to see what happens next and here hoping you do continue the story. If not I'll be forced to add my own ending in my mind and to warn you it will involve crazed cavemen riding large Dogs. Can't say I didn't warn you now can you. Anyway looking forward to more.

Please keep writing. I like this story.

Sarah

great story..hope u post the next part soon

OMG what happens next?

this is like soo totally need 2 know ... u know?

write more plz...

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