I know just by reading the summary that it would be such a cute story and I was right. It was so cute and sweet. Well done ;) Also, I don't think you're missing anything unless you were thinking taking the kiss a step farther.

ADORBALE FLUFF!

omg now that is too fucking adorable (:

wow, i can't believe that was your first fanfiction story! that was really really good!

xox

Annie

I liked it. There may have been something missing but it was still good.

I loved that, awesome work - well done!

amazing story

I really love it it was amazing

you know for your first story, you quite did really good. just like a pro. but there were some kinks. but the story flowed well and hallelujah no cringe-inducing moments. and it's realistic too.

hey,

that was a great story!i had really fun reading it!you described their feelings so well and with such a passion!

is there going to be a sequel?maybe how they tell the school and chad and so on?that would be cool

i really love it

bye

Wow that was good. I would like to see maybe a couple more chapters like make it like a 3-shot or something.

that was really cute

very well written and extremly cute... Thank god! Finnally no sex ! Ha ha oh and I mean ur the only person that doesn't end with a friggen fuk. Haha

i like it! great job for your first one!

this was a cute one-shot