Oh man, that was so well written! Beautiful, original, and with very nice ambiance. You're an excellent J/L writer! More please :)!

This is the most beautiful, tearjerking story I've read out of all the jean/logan fanfics. It makes me wish they were real. You're a genius, keep it up with the J/L stories.

This was a very beautiful story. The characters were right on. I love the Logan/Jean ship.

Perfect story. Characters are actually IN character (what a concept!). Simple, mysterious, engaging, everything a good short story should be. Congratulations!

Okay, fine, you win. I'm now ready to buy stock in this couple.

In all seriousness, this was very well written and I loved the way you crafted such beautiful imagery throughout the story.

Oh and the author's note was hilarious!

There's quite a bit of change from the first to the rewrite, but I like it. I understand Jean and Logan's motives a little more. I'm always impressed with how well you capture the characters. It's amazing, it really is. Keep it up!

you should right a sequal

Thank you so much for putting this story back up. Was really really sad when you took it down. Please, please write more Logan/Jean stories.

Oh, very pretty. Very haunting--it makes there love seem very deep. The Jean/Logan/Scott triangle has always reminded me of Wuthering Heights, maybe because the characters in that felt so deeply as well.

Very beautiful story about strange relationship of Jean/Phoenix and Logan/Wolverine.

That was beautiful!
Tenderly written, with such amazing attention to detail. I could almost 'see' each scene. One of the best short fics I've read in ages!