Aw... I like it. And the saying is one of my favorites too. =P

AW..so cute! I can't wait to read more of your work!

Another beautiful story. Gosh, you are truly talented.

aww sweet :) i loved it!

Loved it!! Loved it!! Loved it!! KUDOS!!

Kawaii KeiChanz!

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haha member me.. i've been reviewing lately... i'm reading all your completed stories and once i'm done.. i'm going back to InuGrl's page and see if she updated one of her stories.. lol!! well anyways i love your stories so far and i have a gut feeling i will LOVE all your stories..

({( oh and by the when you were talkin about kouga and stuff.. you made a kinda name mistake see-->"With a groan, Kagome’s eyes rolled backwards and he collapsed onto the porch, unconscious.")}) you ment to say Kouga instead of Kagome... so yea...

off to bed... nite nite

awe i loved this story!
it was absolutely adorable! =)

I love this one-shot!
Thanx!

i...LOVE...this! awesome!

so cute

Being an avid reader of your work (not much of a reviewer, sorry) I just want to say that this is my favorite of your pieces. It's so romantic and well-written and the flow and concept are just amazing. The progression of their relationship is slow but not too slow. The pacing was perfect and it's the best thing I've read in a while. Loved it.

That being said... sorry if I'm being pretentious but I noticed a few tiny errors throughout the fic. They're really not a big deal but I thought I'd point them out just in case you wanted to fix it. Sorry if it's offensive or not my place.

But then she was suddenly gone from his arms and he blinked in confusion. Looking up with a frown, the next thing he saw was a fist flying toward his face and excruciating pain exploded throughout his nose and skull, sending him stumbling backwards and onto his ass.

With a groan, Kagome’s eyes rolled backwards and he collapsed onto the porch, unconscious.

You mean Kouga right..?

About a month had past since the Kouga incident and Inuyasha had been reappearing at the house more frequently – much to Kagome’s pleasure.

It should be passed instead of past.

her summer dress rusting against her thighs from the soft wind and her black hair brushing against her cheek.

Rustling not rusting.

The next moment the night’s warm air caressed her bear body and she was suddenly pressed flush against him, his shirt gone and his jeans riding dangerously low on his hips, the button and fly undone.

Bare instead of bear.

so good! this should really be made into a story instead of a one-shot. i loved it! please write more!

I loved this! :)