| Reviews for From Denial to Love |
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MLIA-anime 5/6/10 . chapter 1aw...so cute. No its KAWI! |
Juniper Jade 8/18/09 . chapter 1wow too cool! its very good. i love it when you put your writing to song :) |
SweetDarkSilence 7/25/09 . chapter 1This was a really cute oneshot. Great job! |
JUCHKO 7/25/09 . chapter 1That was magnificent! Loved it. The only thing I have to point out is that while Sakura was still in ACC, she didn't know that Itachi was going to kill his clan for sure. At that point in time, she thought she was possibly changing the past and thus the future. You made it seem (to me, at least) as if she already knew she couldn't change the past. One little mistake I caught: 'her blush disappearing to as though it had never been' I suggest you take out the 'to' The only other suggestion I could give you would be that maybe, with the beginning, make a brief intro to explain the time traveling situation for those who haven’t read ACC. You'll be more likely to get readers (and thus reviewers) that way. It’s not a necessity and you don‘t have to do so if you do not wish to; however it may help. Other than that, I have to say "Very well done!" You did wonderfully at keeping them in character. I also found it funny that you decided to add in the whole 'fate/luck/destiny hates me' thing. As to forcing you to take this down: NEVER! I’m not cruel enough to get angry at someone for promoting my works with a beautiful work of their own. You have a disclaimer for me in there, so nothing is wrong! JUCHKO |
hunakai 7/22/09 . chapter 1i love it i cant wait for the next chapter! |
sailorsun777 7/21/09 . chapter 1Oh my godness! I was just watching Hercules today! Love it! ). |
Canned Ham 7/21/09 . chapter 1:O WHOA! I was listening to "I Won't Say (I'm in Love)" when I came across your story, and was all ":O That's such a creepy coincidence!" and then when I went to go read it, I noticed the lyrics, and it was like "WHOA"...yeah. I'll go read now:] Is there any chance that you put it up because Disney Channel was just showing Hercules? Or is that another creepy coincidence? |