 ElsieLorraine 3/4/12 . chapter 1So I'm writing this review only a few years after the publish date of this story, but whatever. This was just epic! Haha, it made me laugh so hard. Luckily I'm alone in the room. I love how Max didn't get the joke despite his smarts. Then again, he's ten and he shouldn't know it yet. And the end scene was hilarious. How awkward for May and drew. Haha. I like this story. Raine |
 RomanceLuva121 3/2/12 . chapter 1Omfg. I laughed so hard that I cried. People left the room cause I was laughing too much. Loved the vending machine bit. Max is way too innocent to be traveling with teenager. Misty was right about Ash and double meanings. Of course Brock is expected to know these things. You're very good at keeping them in character while having them be older than in the show. U should write contestshipping fics more often cause you got Drews personality down pat. Keep up the good work.-RL121 |
 bigdogneversleeps 1/18/12 . chapter 1That was literally the best set up for a that's what she said ever. great friggin job |
 pkmn2112 1/2/12 . chapter 1HA! The end! Gold! But seriously, this was a fun read. It's weird imagining "that's what she said" and Pokemon together, but in that what if scenario, this was good ) |
 Luvinthisstory 12/23/11 . chapter 1 Okay, this is utterly adorable) |
 HerbCurb7 8/6/11 . chapter 1This is amazing! Please do more fics like these. |
 thethreebadgers 5/31/11 . chapter 1You need to write a story called "Your Mom" |
 little.lost.panda 5/16/11 . chapter 1O...M...G...THAT WAS PERFECT! My favorite line is at the end, when Max doesn't even realize that he just made the perfect timing. :D If Ash could see him now...well, he'd laugh! I had to explain to my bro what I was reading, and then he had to read it, cuz he's the one who introduced me to 'that's what she said' jokes. Sadly, we are the same age... |
 Saki0112 3/17/11 . chapter 1this was really funny. I laughed so much while I as reading this. |
 ocean-stars 2/10/11 . chapter 1Oh god, you have no idea how hard I laughed at this xD lol so funny. |
 IvyBean 1/30/11 . chapter 1L. M. F. A. O I laughed so hard through this. Probably cause I'm a dirty-minded person XDD Ahhh, poor Max XDDD Ahaha, I loved that scene with Drew and May back there. *sounds wrong XDDD
I loved this 333 XDD Soo very funny and dirty ;DDDDDDDDD LOOOL, don't worry, Max, u'll get it someday...XDD |
 Daughter Of Poseiden 1/26/11 . chapter 1Haha it was worth it cuz the vending machine part was funny :p |
 Insideoutme 1/2/11 . chapter 1The vending machine scene was genius “God Drew, just shove it in and take what you want so I can finally get some!
Stunning. Simply stunning. I was laughing out loud.
Thanks so much for posting! I think your writing is fantastic) |
 xXMoonsilverXx 10/20/10 . chapter 1-dies of laughter- haha max got it! maxie got the joke! poor may and drew. and i loved it when they're trying to explain it to max and drew comes over. love the jokes!
xXMoonsilverXx |
 Lil Enchantress 9/8/10 . chapter 1Hi, my name's Enchantress, and I approve this fanfiction. :D
Oh my goodness, I was just sitting there in a laughing fit for a few minutes after then end of that... my face was all red from trying to hold it back. I've heard this joke before and I still think it's very immature, but sometimes I just can't help but laugh at a few of them. Like, for instance, the one at the very end. Haha, hilarious! :D
I took your advice and read Sexual Tension first. That was pretty good too. Your humor mixes in well with realistically written story lines. I had a lot of fun reading them. That would be just awesome if there was a short sequel again, focusing on Drew and May meeting up again after all this. (Haha.
Thanks for the laughs.
Lil Enchantress |