 India Present 4/13/03 . chapter 1OMG. This has to be one of the stupidest and baddly written stories out there. For one thing, if you are going to do a song fic get the words right and don't change the song because that's what you did. Then, you practically just repeated every single word in the song and had no dialogue of your own. Also, I guess if your boyfriend cheated on you you would be only too willing to accept him back, obivously. I hope after two years you've been able to get your grammar rules straight because you don't know how to make paragraphs. Of course, in the original song they blamed each other first, but then they found out that the real villain was the guy who was playing them both. Next time you do a song fic please actually have some kind of storyline of your own. |
 Lady Starlight so kiss my ass 4/6/03 . chapter 1me like the ending i love it. Sakura and Syaoran are perfect together. |
 Lady Starlight so kiss my ass 4/6/03 . chapter 1me like the ending i love it. Sakura and Syaoran are perfect together. |
 Lady Starlight so kiss my ass 4/6/03 . chapter 1me like the ending i love it. Sakura and Syaoran are perfect together. |
 Lady Starlight so kiss my ass 4/6/03 . chapter 1me like the ending i love it. Sakura and Syaoran are perfect together. |
 Mars 4/6/02 . chapter 1 Listen that was stupid. Poor Meilin they whole thing was awesome except the end. Even a brat like meilin doesnt deserve that cause Sakura was acting just as bitchy as meilin was in that thing |
 Samara-chan 3/14/02 . chapter 1Ummmmmmm...ok...VERY out of character...why pick on Meiling? She's a very nice person, you know. Well, this is not what I would call good, um...yeah...and it's spelt 'Syaoran' not 'Syaoron' um...OH, I'LL JUST GET TO THE POINT! WHAT KIND OF FUCKED UP ENDING WAS THAT? |
 Dusk-Magic13 2/5/02 . chapter 1! That was interesting! I like that song and it does fit them perfectly, but... um... what's with the ending? Good anywayz! _ Neko-chan |
 sakura-sama 1/3/02 . chapter 1 |
 amy 1/3/02 . chapter 1 After I read it I knowest that it is not really original, you did change something, your song fic is really interesting. |
 Shakira1 1/1/02 . chapter 1Well that was interesting |
 Naki 1/1/02 . chapter 1 ooh me like! _ |
 Mystik-chan 1/1/02 . chapter 1umm... when u r writing songfics, i suggest not repeating the words used in the song. it's too repetitive. |