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SuperMangaFan89
2009-12-15 . chapter 11
Oh, this is so good!
Please, keep writing more!
LOL100
2009-12-09 . chapter 10
plzz post soon ! i hope u do by the way its a really goo d series ur very talented
Becca the fiend
2009-10-21 . chapter 10
Well, I've been reading this story since.. I think somewhere around chapter 4 ish? Maybe. I know it's been at least since chapter 5. Lol. Who knows.

Anyway, I just wanted to say that this story is absolutely fantastic. I love how it includes elements from the original stories of Tsubasa and xHolic, and also how it twists those elements into something original, making this story seem really... possible, I suppose would be one way to describe it. Not like, possible in the real world. But possible with the characters and such.

I have a hard time articulating just what it is I love about this, because I'm beyond words when I'm reading it. It's just so amazing. ;_; I always loved it, and I still love it, and I felt I should tell you that I love it. I mean, only 21 reviews for this is almost criminal. It's so amazing, in my opinion.

I always get so excited to read this, because I know the chapters will be really interesting, and plot-filled. I love stories with a good plot. :)
Ms Bat
2009-09-27 . chapter 9
Great job. I really love the way you've portrayed the characters and the plot is getting really interesting, which is not to say that it hadn't been all this while, but that... ah, nevermind. I think its amazing how you've managed to tie together fairy tales and events from xHolic and Tsubasa so seamlessly that they seem to fall neatly together. I'm looking forward to seeing how everything ends.
Ms Bat
2009-09-26 . chapter 1
Oh wow. I love the first chapter already. And Kurogane banging on the ice coffin-thing - priceless. *hurries to read more*
SuperMangaFan89
2009-09-17 . chapter 9
Poor Fai!
Seishiro got what was coming to him!
This is so good!
Please, keep writing more!
Tomi Lang
2009-09-10 . chapter 8
Idiot! Idiot idiot idiot idiot idiot! I can't believe that they managed to get through six months - half of the time! - and then Fay had to ruin everything! I am so upset, Fay-san, so much. I couldn't expect anything else from him, but seriously, it's frustrating.

Also, the thing with that silver flower Watanuki picked back then seems so scary, like I know something terrible is going to happen, but I just don't know what. I hope he'll be okay ;;

If I didn't say it before, I'll say it now - I just love this story from the bottom of my heart. The amazing descriptions, the good dialouges and the way you manage the keep the characters in character is something precious that I almost cannot find among the TRC fanfictions, something that I think any good story must have, and you have it. Also, I think that how you match your story to the original TRC story, yet keep the characters and events in your own plot is, more than anything, what makes your story so remarkable and such a good AU. Because I see here a real AU - a real alternative universe for TRC.

For all of this - thank you so much! I wait happily for every new chapter, and so I'll wait for the next one, anxious to know what will happen next.
Elodie J
2009-09-08 . chapter 8
Holy askdjfg. I do believe you've gone and broken my brain.

I've been meaning to review this for way too long now (story of my life) but this is amazing. I can't fathom writing something as intricately interconnected as this. Everything fits so seamlessly. I'd've been on my way to the Funny Farm if I tried, I think. Just... I'm in absolute awe.

And this latest chapter - I couldn't figure out Fai and Kurogane's tale until now. Some of them are obvious, like Sleeping Beauty for Yuui. But when Chii gave him the candle I was like "this is EAST! :D ...wait, no!" I loved the book East by Edith Pattou, which is based upon the tale East of Sun, West of Moon, and it finally clicked. But then I realized that he was going to use the stupid candle and effectively ruin things for a bit, which was sad. (Sadder still that I probably wouldn't have seen the end of this chapter coming without East. -_-;)

Wonderful stuff. Wish I had time to write more, but it's some of the best fiction I've seen in a very long time.

~ Elodie
Tameny
2009-09-06 . chapter 8
WOW! I REALLY love this story! It's AMAZING! I stayed up all night reading it! PLEASE update soon!
s2lou
2009-09-06 . chapter 8
Whoops. Just read the whole thing (seriously, why didn't I see this before?) and loved it so far. You have a very nice, amusing, suspenseful style. I'll be waiting for more—oh, and have some cookies for the wonderful work you're doing here.
SuperMangaFan89
2009-09-05 . chapter 8
Oh, so Ashura's getting really jealous!
This is soo good!
Please, keep writing more!
SecondtoNon
2009-09-05 . chapter 8
Update soon!
SecondtoNon
2009-09-01 . chapter 7
Update soon! I love how you incorporated the fairy tales!
SuperMangaFan89
2009-08-20 . chapter 7
This is great!
And I love the tengu-karasu! They always give Watanuki a hard time, lol!
Please, keep writing!
SuperMangaFan89
2009-08-11 . chapter 6
This was hilarious!
And it looked like Fai got Kurogane to play with him in the end!
This is great!'
Please, keep writing more!
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