this was such a short and sweet story.
it was a job well done.
i hope to check more of your stories (i see that you have written many :p )

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Princess-Maiden

Hello... Just wanted to say I really like your story. Please update soon.. Thankyou

Puddingstone

Awesome story... Short but awesome. I like the character. Maybe you can bring her back for another story??

aw soo cute cant wait for the net chapter

I really liked it it was good!

Any Eric Northman story I can get my hands on, I'm all for it, as long as it's written well. And you, dear, have done an AMAZING job! I am looking forward to so much of this story. Elise is a strong character, and it's unfortunate that her turn came because of circumstances out of her control. But...who better a Maker than Eric Northman! *giggling* He's a hard vamp to understand, but once he lets you into his world...that level of loyalty is unheard of! I can't wait to read more of this story!!

oh wow. that was amazing!! perfect ending!!

oh oh oh oh! more!!

This is a great story at times you show more flair for words then the original author. I think you were able to capture Eric very well. 5 stars from me

Amazing story - thank you/!

That was so well done, so well written. It was a perfect ending, but I wouldn't mind if you wrote more about Elise in her new life, finding her way, fighting the monsters that prey on the innocent.

Wow. Is she dead? Is she a vampire? Is this a dream? You've blown my mind and left me with three questions and a "Wow."

Wow, Actually I sort of hope he turns her.

Beautiful story, so sad but so moving! It's an amazing spin from the usual Eric/OC dynamic. You've managed to make Elise an incredibly interesting, fully flashed out character I rooted and felt compassion for. Your Eric is also very in-character and nuanced, both good and bad, cold and passionate, his means might be 'vampiric' but his reasoning and his ends are human all the way, it's a truly twisted yet gorgeous tale, I really enjoyed it, it's rare you'll find fanfiction of a truly psychologically mature nature in this fandom even when it's written by alduts. I've noticed your work is mainly focused on House but I'd like this review to stimulate you to engage further in the True Blood-verse, we fans need more writers like you!

Well that was unexpected! I hope this isn't the end. She certainly called Eric's bluff...perhaps she'll "unlive" to regret it?