Great Story!

It's a good story but I don't like that fact that mars is in love with both girls and your oc is in love with Jennifer makes your oc a little Mary sueish.

good story! Please Update update update update ! i REAlly like it and hope this is enough motivation for you to continue and write another chapter! Pretty please!

Really like the story so far! I want to know what happens next!

Hey,

Really good story! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!

xxAlly

P.S. Sorry for the short and sweet review but it's 2 in the morning and I'm not feelin' loaded with energy to say more right now.

great third chapter and i can not wait to read more of it as soon as you can write it please and thank you

YAY, a Hostage fanfic archive. I've been waiting for this! Also, I like your story, can't wait to know what's gonna happen to Haley! But you know what, when I watched the movie, I had this really odd feeling like Denise and Kevin had a relationship or something. Like incest... I can't help it, but everytime I watch the movie, I get the same feeling... Sorry, this is kind of long and has really nothing to do with your story, but hey, I hope you update soon! :D

Hey, this is really good!

You know, I think someone should make a 'Hostage' category, since i've noticed that there's more than one.

If i make the category would you move your story to there? i'll also tell the others, since it'll be easier for others to find the stories... i had looked for some but cuoldnt find them, bu thankfully i decided to search it, and glad i did!

I was also thinking of writting a hostage story, but it'd be easier if its in a category so more people can see it and read it.

what do you think? reply back!