That was funny, but a bit short. Are you going to continue this or is it done here?

Very cute. Kyon's narration feels slightly off (not quite as detailed, maybe?) but the characterization itself rang true for the situation (even though Kyon probably wouldn't ever agree to it in canon).

Neat. I always thought it was funny how Kyon talks a good game, but guess who's always there at the forefront of the insanity...

Poor Kyon. He should totally have won! Damn Haruhi and her god-mode, heh.

I know it may sound dumb, but what did Kyon mean? At the very end?

Like it! This line of thought could be continued by rating M this fanfic and... developing the story a little bit more. Yet, I appreciate you left it "there"... just on the border...

It was a fun fic also, one-shots tend to be my favorite’s with some exceptions of course.

And about the last comment... do I have to suppose Haruhi mean she wasn't wearing any underwear? Because if it's not that, then I don't have ay clue about what was she talking about.

Good job! Keep it up!

León

Ah, this was fun! Love me some Haruhi. D: Curse the anime for being in an endless loop though. KyoAni and their trolling people.