So, the smokies are a logic based spiral race, Nnoitora became a deamon, and they may have just fixed everything... AWESOME!

Lovecraft's Rubric, Feet of Rincewind, March of Williams - now that's my kind of combat combo! Funny, well written, I like this story very much!

A minor quibble: baring Lovecraftian geometries, nine atoms make up only four points of a pentagram, and a single digit number of missing atoms are not enough to create a fatal fault in a carbon nano tube (sorry, chemist here, pet peeve).

Great story. I really like your humour. I had some moments of total lol, for example the March of Williams and the Feet of Rincewind, as well as the revelation of Mordakka's absolutely awesome weapons. That's the kind of SF-story I crave. Thanks a lot for the enjoyment.

qutie a good piece of work, i see an FMA reference there... well done.

Man there were a lot of references in this chapter but I have to say the best two were the unforgotten realm one and the orkish parody of the LotR speech. The speech was so great it makes me sad that I do not play orks, and so will not have a good excuse to quote it.

xD Ok, ok, that last bit OWNED. God damn, I reacon this is probably the best comedy story I've read this year in the warhammer 40k section, if not in all fanfictions I've read!

You definably had a lot of Discworld inspiration, didn't you? Damn... That last bit still owned the most, a real disworld ending.

Looking forward to more.

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Sorry, I'm ok Just recovering from sudden reference over-load :P Hehehe... I guess that's what they call a nerdgasim xD Seriously! Just how many refernces did you throw into that chapter? Not that I'm complaining or anything...

Critical Existance Failure. I wonder just how many would pick up on that Starship Titanic reference?

Anyway, I'll continue reading now.

lol xD Someone is a fan of Discworld and a certain alchemical anime/manga xP Ok, I is going to keep reading nowz...

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Fleet of Rincewind xD lol, just total lol.

Goddamn... that was an awesome fic. References everywhere. Feet of Rincewind... *falls back into laughing fits*

Very nicely done, very funny. The ending was a little off, for me, but a good story, well worth the bad morning that I'm going to get tomorrow.

That was an awesome story, loved the whole style of it, and was extremely funny, I laughed my *ss of. I'll go read your other story now.

This is one of the funniest stories i have ever read.

Can't wait for more.

This is quite amusing so far.

Only 1 tiny little bone to pick- if all microorganisms had been wiped out, the birds would be dessicated bodies, not skeletons. No microorganisms no biodegradability.

A thoroughly enjoyable story, with an amusing and interesting conclusion. Aside from a few minor spelling errors in the last two chapters, this story has been perfect! THIS SITE NEEDS MORE PEOPLE LIKE YOU!

Bleach and Command and Conquer. I'm rather liking this little 'spot the reference' game!

I'm seeing some Code Geass and some Gurren Lagann in this chapter. The references just keep piling higher and higher! I haven't read something quite like this since Those Without Spines! I LIKE this fic!